Fic: Girl In The Mirror 'Verse, Chapter 11: Sunflowers for Amy

[psyfi_geekgirl]

Title: Girl In The Mirror ‘Verse, Chapter 11: Sunflowers for Amy
Author: psyfi_geekgirl  
BetaBabe: akkajemo 
Characters/Pairings: Twelve, Amy/Rory, Amelia, Tabetha and Augustus Pond
Rating: PG-13
Excerpt: Originally, she’d had no idea what this change was supposed to teach her. Now she had a much better idea... 
Word count: 3,639
Disclaimer: Until she’s Jossed, Twelve is mine

Comments

[develish1]

I'm not good with angst, so this chapter was a tough one, but I'm still here :)

[psyfi_geekgirl]

I know. Thank you :)
*huggles*

[zazie11]

You skank.

You made me cry in at least three different places. Welly eyes, trembly bottom lip -the works.

You got me, here:
Amy smiled, and made a small gesture for the Doctor to lean down to her. Slowly and with great effort, Amy rasped into the Doctor’s ear, “No matter… what… form you… take.”

And Here:
“Bye bye, Pond,” she said, lovingly kissing the tips of her hair, her forehead and then caressing her face before leaving the room.

And Here:

Frankly, the whole death scene with the family going in to say goodbye was beautifully written, but the image you conjure here - I can absolutely see it, and it's so sad and beautiful -

They gently removed all of the equipment and breathing apparatus-everything foreign and non-organic was taken out of the room immediately so that they could see her as she was-remember her as she was-released from the struggle and torment of her body’s failings.

Yes, quivery here, too:
Standing back, she imagined the ghost of the adorably brave, ginger haired girl who had cooked him beans, toast and

[psyfi_geekgirl]

YAY! I'M A SKANK!!! I'M A SKANK!!!

*guffaw*

But, seriously. Wow. Thanks!
I'm so glad to hear it moved you.

VVG it is NOT. *pouts* my beta thought this too, and I did re-work it, but obviously not well enough... :(

You totally nail the doppleganger!Amy
??? who is doppleganger!Amy??? I've not seen 2nd half of Flesh ep yet... So I'm not that clairvoyant, I'm afraid. Twelve just goes to see Amy 7 years in the past from when she dies.

Yet another chapter where I want to quote the whole damned thing back to you.
More than fine with me :)

*hands u a tissue*
See you on Friday ;)

xo
Sporty

[zazie11]

Such a skank!
*teehees*

I'm so glad to hear it moved you.
-- That it did! :)

VVG it is NOT. *pouts* my beta thought this too, and I did re-work it, but obviously not well enough... :(
-- No, don't say that. It's the sunflowers ... it was just the first thing I thought of - the most obvious possibility. I should know by now that you are not going to go for the obvious possibility*

* See note, above, about said-skankiness

You totally nail the doppleganger!Amy
??? who is doppleganger!Amy??? I've not seen 2nd half of Flesh ep yet... So I'm not that clairvoyant, I'm afraid. Twelve just goes to see Amy 7 years in the past from when she dies.

*beats self like Dobby*

No, I got that it's Amy, in the future.
THIS WHOLE CONVERSATION NEVER HAPPENED.

:P

*accepts your tissues with a little curtsy and looks forward to Friday* :D

xo Zaz

[zazie11]

... and by skank, I mean WICKED AWESOME.

;)