Fic: Girl In The Mirror 'Verse, Chapter 10: Amelia

[psyfi_geekgirl]

Title: Girl In The Mirror ‘Verse, Chapter 10: Amelia
Author: psyfi_geekgirl  
BetaBabe: akkajemo 
Characters/Pairings: Twelve, Amy/Rory, Amelia
Rating: PG-13
Excerpt: She didn’t know when she was going to ever get used to this whole idea of being a woman-didn’t know if she wanted to.
Word count: 6,367
Disclaimer: Until she’s Jossed, Twelve is mine-but of course based entirely

Comments

[zazie11]

This is a place marker comment, because I want to review this properly, during the weekend.

That being said, you've ... this chapter ... it's ...

If I'm not speaking coherently, it's because blood isn't pumping to my brain correctly ... because you didn't just break my heart with this chapter. You broke it, you smushed it, you bent it, you folded it and you most definitely tore it up a bit.

And then you mended it with glittery nail polish.
And self-acceptance.
And the end bit ... Oh, Sporty. Really, no words for the end bit.

I'm going to put my heart into my gold spangly pocketbook now, and will pull it back out tomorrow.

But for now - BEAUTIFUL.Just that.

x Z

[develish1]

that's just.....wow.

what a brilliant way of making the Doctor see she isn't some sort of freak, beautifully done love :)