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*ROOM SIXTEEN*
welcome to my hotel and
sit down and wait your turn
hope you don't mind room sixteen
be patient and you'll learn
the door will unlock the key
to save him or your mind
don't think just speak just choose one
fire burns hot you'll find
have you ever seen this man
he has no name no face
he guards the endless chasm
reach out and grasp his hand
he holds the knife of justice
he holds it high and clean
will he spare your life tonight
don't come to room sixteen
ok so i just read that over and it sucks but it's only somewhat good if you read it in rhythm. each first and thrid line is seven syllables and each second and fourth line is six syllables so read it like da-da-da-da-da-da-da da-da-da-da-da-da (or like if you tap your feet up and down there will be a syllable on the first 6 and a half taps, then rest for 1 and a half taps) at an even pace. even then it still blows but it makes more sense i guess.
on second thought that probably makes even less sense with all that rambling i just did. no one will even understand what i'm talking about.
i'm CRAZY
welcome to my hotel and
sit down and wait your turn
hope you don't mind room sixteen
be patient and you'll learn
the door will unlock the key
to save him or your mind
don't think just speak just choose one
fire burns hot you'll find
have you ever seen this man
he has no name no face
he guards the endless chasm
reach out and grasp his hand
he holds the knife of justice
he holds it high and clean
will he spare your life tonight
don't come to room sixteen
ok so i just read that over and it sucks but it's only somewhat good if you read it in rhythm. each first and thrid line is seven syllables and each second and fourth line is six syllables so read it like da-da-da-da-da-da-da da-da-da-da-da-da (or like if you tap your feet up and down there will be a syllable on the first 6 and a half taps, then rest for 1 and a half taps) at an even pace. even then it still blows but it makes more sense i guess.
on second thought that probably makes even less sense with all that rambling i just did. no one will even understand what i'm talking about.
i'm CRAZY