Just a writing experiment.
Which makes more sense:
First Person) My name is William Steven Davis and six months ago I was released from prison. I spent ten years behind bars from crimes I committed under the name Sinergy. Now I’m out and I’m trying to do good. My neighborhood is rife with gangs, corrupt cops, dirty businesspeople and general nastiness. I have made it my duty to clean up The Inferno.
Third Person) William Steven Davis was released from prison six months ago. He spent ten years behind bars for crimes he committed under the name Sinergy. He’s back on the street and has pledged to clean up The Inferno, his home neighborhood. It is rife with gangs, corrupt cops, dirty businesspeople and general nastiness.
First Person) My name is William Steven Davis and six months ago I was released from prison. I spent ten years behind bars from crimes I committed under the name Sinergy. Now I’m out and I’m trying to do good. My neighborhood is rife with gangs, corrupt cops, dirty businesspeople and general nastiness. I have made it my duty to clean up The Inferno.
Third Person) William Steven Davis was released from prison six months ago. He spent ten years behind bars for crimes he committed under the name Sinergy. He’s back on the street and has pledged to clean up The Inferno, his home neighborhood. It is rife with gangs, corrupt cops, dirty businesspeople and general nastiness.