Whoa!!! I read the "warning" of BDSM and already told you about my dirty little mind which is now totally overrun with joy! When I read BDSM I´m surely kind of expected feeling excited before reading your fic, but I didn`t expect what had been revealed, when I was actually reading it! I have really no idea why you had been terrified posting this because it`s absolutely great and "oh, so hot"!
After a quick overview of the rest of the club and a finalrecital of the rules
The word "rules" in this context had me already gasp out exitedly, all the suggestions that came to my mind because of this...
She surveyed the room and was immediately drawn to a scene playing out in a far corner. A man, tall and thin with a t-shirt stretched across a muscular back was tying a woman to a wooden cross.I love that she is immediately attracted to him, my immediate idea was that you make it seem or that you proofed that she is not attracted to his damage, but rather his body and the idea what he can do to her and how he acts, when you describe
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The word "rules" in this context had me already gasp out exitedly, all the suggestions that came to my mind because of this..
I didn't even think of that, lol. It was just a way to connect the paragraphs. Good catch.
I love that she is immediately attracted to him, my immediate idea was that you make it seem or that you proofed that she is not attracted to his damage, but rather his body and the idea what he can do to her and how he acts, when you describe furthermore what she sees watching him without knowing that he indeed is House.
I'm in awe of you right now for picking all this stuff up! (especially when most of it wasn't intentionally placed in there, but we won't tell anyone that okay lol -maybe that was a little bit though)
While reading this you left me throbbing, too, by imagining Camerons imagination here!
That's what I like to hear!
I had to break off reading, seriously break off reading, because it was way to much, in an indescribable good way! BEST COMMENT EVER. I love that it created such a strong reaction, it
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Oh, am I really allowed to suggest a request? (so excited ...!)
Hm, the romantic in me proposes a sequel and the "first-time-fic" lover probably asks for a separate fic! Ok, I think this overextends me, because I`m pretty much sure both of it would make me very happy! So, if you decide to write anything at all I will love it in any case! (gives the responsibility away and just begs for more writing) ;-)
I read the "warning" of BDSM and already told you about my dirty little mind which is now totally overrun with joy! When I read BDSM I´m surely kind of expected feeling excited before reading your fic, but I didn`t expect what had been revealed, when I was actually reading it! I have really no idea why you had been terrified posting this because it`s absolutely great and "oh, so hot"!
After a quick overview of the rest of the club and a finalrecital of the rules
The word "rules" in this context had me already gasp out exitedly, all the suggestions that came to my mind because of this...
She surveyed the room and was immediately drawn to a scene playing out in a far corner. A man, tall and thin with a t-shirt stretched across a muscular back was tying a woman to a wooden cross.I love that she is immediately attracted to him, my immediate idea was that you make it seem or that you proofed that she is not attracted to his damage, but rather his body and the idea what he can do to her and how he acts, when you describe ( ... )
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I didn't even think of that, lol. It was just a way to connect the paragraphs. Good catch.
I love that she is immediately attracted to him, my immediate idea was that you make it seem or that you proofed that she is not attracted to his damage, but rather his body and the idea what he can do to her and how he acts, when you describe furthermore what she sees watching him without knowing that he indeed is House.
I'm in awe of you right now for picking all this stuff up! (especially when most of it wasn't intentionally placed in there, but we won't tell anyone that okay lol -maybe that was a little bit though)
While reading this you left me throbbing, too, by imagining Camerons imagination here!
That's what I like to hear!
I had to break off reading, seriously break off reading, because it was way to much, in an indescribable good way! BEST COMMENT EVER. I love that it created such a strong reaction, it ( ... )
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LOL, see how gifted you`re...!
I love that it created such a strong reaction, it tells me I did something right when writing it.
Oh, that`s an understatement, you really did everything absolutely right!
You didn`t comment my beg to keep on writing so I will try again: Please keep on writing! ;-) *hugs back*
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Hm, the romantic in me proposes a sequel and the "first-time-fic" lover probably asks for a separate fic! Ok, I think this overextends me, because I`m pretty much sure both of it would make me very happy! So, if you decide to write anything at all I will love it in any case! (gives the responsibility away and just begs for more writing) ;-)
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