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[anodracs]

Here's my attempt at a more serious, more adult PSoH fanfic. Please tell me what you think, critical feedback is welcome!
Title: Valhalla, part 1
Author: Jeweleyes
Characters: Leon/D
Rating: R, for sexual fantasy and brief mention of naughty bits.
Summary: The water's not working at Leon's apartment...

Comments

[pixiesmith]

//Wouldn't want to drop the soap// *snicker*

Putting in a few 'enters' between paragraphs will make for easier reading, but I'm really enjoying the story so far. You've captured their personalities perfectly!

[duowolf]

Fic seems interesting so far, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next:)

[lucymay_lj]

I didn't notice the part one bit, so I was so disappointed when it ended! I hope you'll post the rest soon. You write the characters very convincingly. Excellent job so far!

^_^ '

[anonymous]

More please !!! *grin*

[moon_lit_night]

I really like it so far. Please continue :)