PSOH "Honeymoon"

[tigersilver]

Rated: R, NC-17
Pairing: Leon X D
I am not feeling well and am thus posting, cause I can write with a fever, apparently. I thought they should have a honeymoon, of sorts, since I didn't think living together would be all that easy for them. 
Hope you like it; please leave me a comment or 2.

Honeymoon

In the first few days, it still seemed like a

Comments

[mellifluous_ink]

Ooo, I like this. You captured the spirit of the beginning of a solid relationship well, as well as the dam of longtime celibacy breaking. I like that there was plot along with all the sex--and Leon trying to be a tourist (we all know he was worried D would find him a lustful goat, c'mon!) was so cute.

I'm also quite happy that you wrote this during thenew series, but didn't make it inaccessable to those of us who haven't finished the first series yet.

[tigersilver]

Thank you - and I'm terribly sorry the font is so effing HUGE - I've got to be more careful when I post. This was an enjoyable one- I thought a lot about the 'happily ever after' and wondered if they would be more careful of each other as they settled in. Which is not to say they don't argue. I am thinking of one where they will.

[drachenmina]

Oh, this is lovely! I love all the detail you put in, and am absolutely in awe of your research (unless you actually live in the Tokyo area, in which case, you jammy so-and-so!) I particularly liked D, having been introduced to sex, being hornier than Leon!

Um, is concrit welcome from a total newbie? Because there was one thing that jumped out at me, mainly because I've been criticized on it myself in the past.

[tigersilver]

I spent some time as a virtual tourist and probably screwed up badly, but it's fic, so hopefully my solecisms can be forgiven.
Crit is welcome, but please post it to my LJ, as whatever bothers you may not trouble another reader. I've read some posts where the crit blemishes the fic and starts heated discussions that are not necessarily fair or needed. And I've read crit that is positive and propping and gratefully received. But I've got more than my share of screw-ups just writing, so I hope you help me out and make the next one better! Bring it on, my dear, and I'll give you a cookie just for paying attention to my sorry excuses for fanfic!^^

[drachenmina]

Oh, it's no biggie, believe me! I only hoped I haven't worried you/discouraged you from writing, as I adore your stories, which are anything but sorry excuses for fanfic!

See you on your LJ! *g*

[tigersilver]

Cookie! Double mocha chip w/walnuts and caramel drizzle.

[purple_ftw]

*dribbles madly*
I curse my inability to properly describe the awesomeness that is this fic! *implodes*
...
*comes back*
That means I like it.
*risks glance up*
*implodes again*

[tigersilver]

(Cleans up floor and pats purple_ftw back into shape, offering coffee and chocolate) I'm glad, though I hope you're ok!

[purple_ftw]

*eats offered goodies*
I'm okay! *sags* glurble.