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Pet Shop of Horrors, "Twilight"

Feb 17, 2008 19:57

Title: Twilight
Pairing: Leon X D
Appearing: Q-chan, and Momo (at least a mention)
Rated: R for smex, thank you.
Warnings: Go away if you're not allowed to read smex, please.
Third one in an arc, with quite possibly more to come. Comments, please, cause they are manna, man.

One Evening

Twilight

The Count stood on the sidewalk, carefully observing the ( Read more... )

Comments 10

ani_mama February 18 2008, 18:53:11 UTC

*snicker* Leon calls Sofu Q-chan! Very cute...

popkin16 February 19 2008, 04:16:25 UTC

I really loved this. Normally I don't like MPREG fics (I refuse to read them) but it seems to be a weakness of mine in this fandom. This is the second one I've read, and considering my dislike of them, says quite a bit I think.

You wrote the characters - especially Leon and Q-chan - wonderfully. I could see Leon acting this way for the one he loves (which is obviously D), and Q-chan's dislike of Leon seemed appropriate too...though I'm not sure about that. He was there throughout the manga and didn't seem to really dislike Leon...he always struck me as neutral.

But you did an AMAZING job on this, and I'll be adding it to my memories. I hope you do write more for this fandom!

tigersilver February 20 2008, 03:13:04 UTC

Thank you! And I agree with you totally about Q-chan. I think he enjoys 'disliking' Leon, but he did go to him for help when D was kidnapped and throughout the 10 vols generally did nothing to remove D from Leon's clutches, or vice versa.
And I am writing more. It's a sickness, an obsession, and I'll never get my taxes done!

popkin16 February 20 2008, 03:36:37 UTC

You're very welcome!

Perhaps Q-chan WANTS to dislike Leon, but he really doesn't? You made an excellent point: Q-chan really did go to Leon for help, and he wouldn't do that unless he thought Leon would help and was trustworthy. If he'd really want Leon gone from the shop, I have no doubt he could have done it easily.

I think it'd be Leon from D's clutches, personally. D strikes me as the type to be really self-aware. He'd know he was attracted to Leon, but I'm not sure he'd act on it. Though he might not understand all the emotions that go with being attracted to someone. Like jealousy and whatnot.

*Ahem* Sorry for the rambling! YAY for more fics! XD

dairokkan February 19 2008, 14:06:27 UTC

LOL at Gramps deciding he wanted to get invited in after he got a whiff of the goodies, and drinking up all D's Oolong. Awesome.

Ditto the squickiness of mpreg, but since we're dealing with a hermaphroditic D, it doesn't bother me in this context.

Looking forward to the next one!

tigersilver April 17 2008, 01:49:38 UTC

I have this thing for baked goods, so I am totally sympathetic to a hot man in a tux who likes tartes.

porcelainmistre April 15 2008, 21:18:16 UTC

Oh wow..this was amazing. I would love read another one. ^.^

tigersilver April 17 2008, 01:51:15 UTC

Goood! There's a whole bunch of them - I cannot stop writing PSOH for the life of me! Thank you for reading my humble offerings - there's an awful lot of very good fanfic here in Domino!

nsub October 29 2008, 17:36:52 UTC

wonderful, all parts I've read, just like the 1st time I read it[shame on me for not commenting before]. I just now caught the reference to Takeshi Gouda, ballet dancer? Are you a fan of Kimi wa Petto/Tramps Like Us[U.S.] perhaps?
: D

tigersilver October 31 2008, 04:01:24 UTC

That I am! I adore Momo...such a nice boy to find in a box! Good for you - you get a cookie!