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Habits

Nov 26, 2004 03:06

Title: Habit Breaking
Author: Susan
Rating: G once more! *disgust*
Word count: 99. Woo! Just made it...
Pairings or characters involved: D, Leon.
Notes: Don't ask me where this came from. I was just sitting here, browsing the old drabbles (I'm determined to read them all. So many good ones...), when the first line hit me. Wrote it, carried on ( Read more... )

Comments 15

glitterbats November 15 2004, 20:50:13 UTC

wow. I like this. I really, really like this.

Habit bordering on psychosis.. Hmm.. habits.. mental illnesses..

*is attacked by plotbunnies*

Attack of the Plot Bunnies not_cynical November 16 2004, 10:54:28 UTC

Ooh! Plot Bunnies! Lemme see! *Holds out arms*

I'm glad you liked it - and that you've got some plot bunnies from it. *meditavely* I've never seen anyone spawn bunnies from something I've done...

Thanks! *sends hugs*

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Got it one! not_cynical November 16 2004, 10:56:56 UTC

You've understood perfectly dear. ^_^ *blushes* I'm glad you think it's so pretty!

jinsai November 16 2004, 02:08:28 UTC

Ooh. It took me a second. I like. Very, very much. I love how we get to see both of them going through the same sort of actions, and the same sort of pain. The back-and-forth style you used works great, as does ending with a rhetorical question. Yayness!

not_cynical November 16 2004, 11:29:47 UTC

I agree! Yayness! Glad you liked it - and that you think it works. Thank you!

rei_kurasaki November 16 2004, 02:34:07 UTC

Nice play of two places and two reactions...in one drabble. Schizo anyone?

not_cynical November 16 2004, 11:31:43 UTC

You can tell? LOL. I'm glad you like - thanks. Where's that pic from? Someone said it was a webcomic...

(Please note: susan's only mental disease is that she has no mind to contract mental disease.)

rei_kurasaki November 16 2004, 12:24:38 UTC

Pic is from a webcomic aptly named Sinfest. I obsess badly like that comic a lot. You can check it out here:

: Sinfest :

(ps: Don't worry, I'm sure Susan has a mind if she can write stuff like that *points to above drabble*)

not_cynical November 16 2004, 17:18:06 UTC

*is busy checking out Sinfest* Tis very cool. I agree - it's worthy of obsessing over.

*realises she's been complimented* *blushes* Thank you! I'm not convinced, but thank you sooooooooo much.

pseudonymouse November 16 2004, 10:10:45 UTC

The set-up reminds me a lot of one of the drabbles I wrote for this community earlier this year. It makes for an interesting effect.

not_cynical November 16 2004, 11:33:27 UTC

T_T And I thought I was being original... I didn't know. If I had... I probably would have done the same thing actually. I'm glad you approve.