The Future's Bright; the Future's Black.

Oct 28, 2005 09:43

Title: The Future’s Bright, the Future’s Black
Author: Susan
Rating: G
Word Count: 276 Dammit, and this was going to be a challenge response to...
Characters: I want to say All Of Them, but it‘s not. It’s only Sofu D, New D, Actual D, Chris, and Leon. S’all.
Notes: I actually tried to write a challenge response. It kinda... grew. *needs to hire a ( Read more... )

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meph_kurama October 28 2005, 06:55:41 UTC
So good! I like the order you used and the sense of sadness your writing brings out in this!

Thank you!
Meph

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snuffles_de_pon October 28 2005, 18:32:44 UTC
Don't hire that drabble pruner.. 'cause the person won't know which parts to clip, and will most likely take away the elements that matter. ;o; 'Sides, you'd have to pay this person. x3

I loved this drabble. This is how I envisioned most of the characters when I thought about their 'ends.' D's struck me the most because.. I dunno, the image of those two exchanging nasty barbs [well, D's barbs are nasty] over pastries that are dainty enough to wilt in the negative cloud.. That image is stuck; long after the series ended for me.

So..yeah.

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not_cynical October 31 2005, 12:15:58 UTC
Good point. Veeery good point. My purse says the drabble pruner mustn't be hired...

I'm glad you liked it. ^_^

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somniesperus October 28 2005, 21:23:47 UTC
Oh, ow, ow ow. This is gorgeous. And so horribly, sadly true.

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not_cynical October 31 2005, 12:12:29 UTC
Thanks. ^_^ One day, I'm going to have to write something that DOESN'T make you go ow...

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snap_chopstick November 2 2005, 00:26:41 UTC
My, how depressing. Very good, but... sigh. Depressing. Poor things.

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