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[Talk Like a Pirate Day] Chapter 8: "Hornswaggle"

Apr 23, 2011 04:33

STORY TITLE: "Talk Like a Pirate Day ( Read more... )

15 mokona on a dead mans chest, fai, tsubasa, fanfiction, fic, kurofai, kurogane

Comments 7

total_alias April 23 2011, 10:42:00 UTC

DOUBLE CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES give Fai the right to act however he pleases! And that, Kamui, is why he is the Pirate King!
I can't even tell you how much I love the way you wrote Kamui here. He's just so gorgeously cynical and irritable and just... HIM. <3 *secretly harboring much love for a certain pirate*

Kurogane "smolders". 'Tis true *nodnod*

psiten April 24 2011, 01:51:49 UTC

Kamui is in denial about the chocolate chip cookies, really. He should have realized by now that baked goods are an incontrovertible source of power.

Thank you so much for reading! I hope you like the rest when it's done. ^_^

fieldofclover April 23 2011, 11:28:37 UTC

I love that there was this whole background debate, complete with mathematical multipliers and consideration on a scale of bondage with bondage substitute for extra bonus points, for figuring out how many points Fai scored when he... ahem, scored.

And how his Majesty was paying attention to everything and nothing all at the same time, while primping and preening and being a fop, just to look good for the date parlay, and still managed to be sneak insightful at the same time.

It's good to be the King indeed XD

And Kamui is such a bitchy little thing; it's perfect :D

I love this so hard; I'm happy for you that you managed to beat your writers block and absolutely champing at the bit for the next chapters.

Thank you for writing this!

psiten April 24 2011, 09:38:46 UTC

My beta and I had so much fun figuring out the points system. Also, that Doumeki deserves more points than he's claiming, because he doesn't realize how highly ranked Watanuki is.

Thank you again for commenting, both here and on AO3! I'm really glad you like it, and can't wait to get the rest finished.

fieldofclover April 24 2011, 09:46:19 UTC

Of course Watanuki is worth a lot of points! He's Yuuko's assitant/slave/popcorn boy. Also he should totally get bonus points for seducing him without him actually knowing he's being seduced :D

Thank YOU for writing it, it's so great to read, and deserves love!

peaceful_fury April 24 2011, 02:00:39 UTC

This is wonderful and squee and just so perfect.

Glomps

Will leave better review after I re-read and don't have to quickly rush off

Hugs

psiten April 24 2011, 09:39:40 UTC

Thank you for reading! ::hugs:: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!