HMD/Concrit/Feedback
OCD mandates that I make a seperate post for feedback. Please give it, folks. I crave it. *shot* Is Gil too fluffy-wuffy mooshy-gooshy, or too unbelievably angsty, even with the background/justifications I've provided? Please let me know (I'm working on it I swear ;~;). All feedback is very much appreciated.