Fic: With A Clouded View, Part 2 of 9 (Narnia - Lucy/Susan - PG)

[prunesquallormd]

Title: With A Clouded View (Part 2 of 9)
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia
Pairing(s): Lucy/Susan
Rating: PG for this part. NC-17 overall
Summary: In which Lucy is guilt-ridden and Edmund is infuriating.
Word count: 4123
Warnings: Incest, although only implied so far. Don't like? Don't read.
A/N: Chapter 1 and initial notes are here.

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[sushizuzoru]

I think I'll save all of my fangasming for when I actually better get to talk to you - maybe over MSN or something but.

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<3

[prunesquallormd]

Eeeee, thank you ♥

I was so sure that no one would be interested in this, so I'm so happy that you liked it :)

It'll be lovely to catch up, and I'll be really happy to hear if you have any thoughts and suggestions about this :D

I hope you had a fabulous week!
♥

[sushizuzoru]

Welcome <3

Oh, please, I spent hours fangasming with you and trying to type up ideas for this bad boy. Of course I'd be interested :D

My week's been alright, I guess. Can't wait to catch up. Sounds fab~

[prunesquallormd]

Touch wood, LJ seems to have been stable for the last couple of days, so yay! All these DDoS attacks have been such a pain. Bloody hackers :(
After all those problems, I'm so happy that you read this and enjoyed it. Thank you so much ♥
It's lovely that you remembered the first part so well, too, cos it's been so long!
I'm three quarters of the way through chapter 3, though, so at least that shouldn't take 8 months to finish :)

Thanks, Jack. I really appreciate it!
♥

(Also, did you notice that I'm using the Lucy/Susan icons you made for me? I love them so much! ♥)

[prunesquallormd]

YAY! I'll be right there!

The layout's rather pretty, isn't it? None of my doing, mind! Anna made the header for me, which I lovelovelove so much! It's just gorgeous. And the CSS code was partly her and partly someone else :)
I need to tinker with it a bit more, and it may be that black on white is more practical for people to actually be able to read stuff, but I do like the way this looks. Pretty <3

[prunesquallormd]

Hey Liz

[prunesquallormd]

Awww, you poor thing :(
It sounds like you've really been in the wars. I hope at least that your nose is healing quickly (I've really no idea how long a broken nose takes to heal, presumably not the 6 or so weeks that an arm or leg would take? I hope not, anyway).

I'm ok, thanks :) Just saw Sucker Punch, which I'm rather in two minds about, but it was certainly a spectacle!
Time for bed for me, now (damn this time difference :/) but yes, I'll definitely try and catch you for a chat next week!
Get well soon!
♥

[likecharity]

Oh, yay! I went to Liverpool for a few days and I was so happy to see this on my flist when I got back, and then all of my computer issues happened and I didn't get a chance to read it until now. I'm actually saving this comment in case I get another blue screen attack. XD

[prunesquallormd]

You were in Liverpool on Grand National weekend? Hectic! Did you manage to avoid the throngs of massively overdressed, very drunk people? :D (I avoid town like the plague on National weekend; the evenings, at least, are really unpleasant :/ ).
Either way, I hope you had a lovely time ♥
And I hope the blue screen of death has been blessedly absent :)

Thank you for all of this♥
It means a lot to me that you read this, and that you liked it. It's taken so long, and been kind of painful at times, so the fact that you think it follows on well from the first part is incredibly gratifying,especially so since, early on in particular, weeks would go by between one sentence and the next. I was rather worried that it would feel disjointed or jumpy for exactly that reason. It was all rather daunting really

[j_death]

Well, you've got me hooked =) I hope we'll get to see some more action next chapter XD

[prunesquallormd]

Thank you! I'm really happy you enjoyed it :)

Part 3 is almost done and, um, I'm afraid there's not a hell of a lot more action, although it's a pretty pivotal chapter. Part 4 should be where things start to happen properly. I hope you can wait that long :D

[j_death]

Why not? I'm certain it would be worth the wait =)