Power Rangers: Whole (5/?), Billy/Tommy, R.

[van]

I feel like stuff actually happens in this chapter, hooray. :D Enjoy.

Title: Whole, chapter five
Author: vandonovan
Pairing: Eventual Billy/Tommy, background Rocky/Adam, Skull/Kim, Jason/Zack.
Word count: 4,144 (this chapter)
Rating: R (over all)
Era: MMPR AU after "The Green Candle" where Tommy never becomes the White Ranger. (Picks up in 1999.)
Warnings:

Comments

[dreamfall_ff]

hahahaha, Mack got flashy-thinged! 'Course that's probably directly out of PR, my canon is sadly lacking, but for me it was straight MiB, and that rocked in and of itself:p

Love the Skull/Kim, and looking forward to Kim's looking for answers from Billy.

And yay for the Billy-Zordon confrontation! It's been a long time coming, and hopefully Z will use it to start growing a clue.

Nice chapter!

[van]

Ahhahha, no you're right, it was totally taken from MIB. The tech is totally PR style though, so I was like "Dammit, I'm gonna use it."

Yay for Skull/Kim. You have no idea how happy I was when I got older and realized other people also shipped them. XD

Writing Billy pwning Zordon was so much fun. XD

[annethundr05]

How the hell did I miss this fic, well darn. But I guess better late than never. Anyway I so heart this story. I love everything about it. :-D You actually made me like Tommy. I will probably be ostracized for this but he was never really my favorite ranger. I liked him Green and kinda-sorta in white but after he went red I just didn't care for him at all. But I really like angry, broody, messed up Tommy. Billy always was awesome and rocked, even more so in this. Zordon is an ass, and it's nice that he knows it now. I'm gonna end this before I start to ramble even more, So please put up a new chapter soon (considering I read all 5 previous in one go.) das woot! \o/

[van]

Awww, thanks so much for the review, it really made my day. I actually really didn't care for Tommy much myself, so you're not alone. I've since warmed up to him, or at least my fanon version of him. I was definitely setting out to write a version of Tommy I didn't hate though, so I'm glad that it's working for someone else who isn't a big fan either.

I should have another chapter up this weekend, so fear not. :D This thing is getting so massively out of hand. I think I'm on chapter 15 in writing already, hahahaa. Great to know I have another reader. :D Thanks again!

[sparowe]

I'm late, thank goodness for Google. You have... no idea... how long I have been waiting for someone to take Zordon to task. Even in canon, Tommy and the others deserved better.

[tentaino_konton]

The whole concept of Billy putting Zordon in his place is something I never really thought about, but it makes so much sense. He really doesn't realize just how much these kids are giving up. When Billy started listing everything off, it made me wanna cry. It reminds me of what I was talking to you about with the Animorphs--same kind of concept. Young kids put through a ton more than they ever should have been.

Great chapter. :) I'm liking this story more and more with every chapter!

[van]

I've only seen the covers of Animorphs and they've greatly put me off because I don't like the concept of people turning into animals, but you make me actually curious now, ahhah. I reaaaaaally have a lot of issues with Zordon, so it was great to write that scene, and it's not the only one like it in the fic, ahaha.

[tentaino_konton]

I gotta tell you, if you want teenage angst, you can't get any better than animorphs. If you're feeling brave you can find a bunch of digital copies online. That's how I read them nowadays.

At any rate, we have to talk about Zordon issues later. I AM V. CURIOUS

[van]

I don't tend to buy digital books, but I will definitely keep an eye out next time I'm in a used bookstore. XD

And oh, Zordon. So many issues. SO MANY.