Anniversary Bingo Challenge Response: Fall (part 4 of 4)

[zea_taylor]

Title:           Fall
Author:       zea_taylor
‘Verse:        G1
Rating:        T/PG-13
Warnings:   Major destruction, Civilian deaths, Angst, Cybertronian profanity.

Comments

[wicked3659]

This was a beautiful bitter sweet ending that made me cry a little. A lovely well done story. Thank you for sharing and kicking off the challenge so wonderfully <3 ^_^

[zea_taylor]

Thank you! It was a lot of fun to write and I'm glad it seems to have gone down well. Thanks again for the inspiring prompts, I've enjoyed getting back into writing this pair.

*fights off bunnies waving another set of prompts*

[wicked3659]

*enciurages* you're more than welcome to enter with another 7 ^_^

[kkcliffy]

This is such a beautiful chapter, it brought tears to my eyes! Jazz knew just how to help both Prowl and Blue. They can start to heal with his help

[zea_taylor]

I think everyone has some healing to do - but they have each other and they have a chance of getting there.

Thanks for your comments on this fic. I've really appreciated hearing from you :)

[whitefirebird]

Despite the destruction riddled throughout, my heart is all kinds of feel-good now.
Thank you for such a wonderful piece.

[zea_taylor]

You're quite welcome - thank you for reading and commenting! This was a lot of fun to write, despite - as you say - the destruction. In fact I think it's given me itchy fingers to write some more ;)

[renegadewriter8]

This was awesome, and sad. Jazz is such a good friend. Poor Blue TT More more more! =)

[zea_taylor]

I don't think Prowl ever realised just how good a friend Jazz is until this. But yes, they have each other, and Blue has them both, and that's what matters.

Thanks for commenting - I've looked forward to your verdict on each part in turn. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm afraid that's it for this one though. As for more... well, maybe, but no promises :)

[renegadewriter8]

Teehee no problem! Nooo haha that's okay, it was really good. I loved it lots. Ohooo, tease! haha ^^

[fianna9]

I really like the comments about the toy; something so insignificant can become so precious. I also found Prowl's observation about Special Ops and the reality of losses and survivors guilt. Very well done story.

[zea_taylor]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)