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Anniversary Challenge Day 19: Yuanfen

Sep 19, 2012 23:23

Title: I knew you when I first met you
By Fianna9
Verse: G1/AU (Watching verse)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1773
Prompt: Yuanfen
Disclaimer: I know I don’t own Transformers. So much for wishful thinking.
Summary: Sometimes the person you meet doesn’t stay a stranger for long

A/N: I hope I got the spirit of this prompt with this multi-section fic, but I ran out ( Read more... )

poster: fianna9, prowlxjazz: 12, au, fan fiction: 2012, tf-g1: 11-12, anniversary challenge 12, rated pg

Comments 10

wicked3659 September 20 2012, 10:19:20 UTC

*cheers cliffy on* XDD Jazz I think just realised just how cared about Prowl is and what challenge it is he's setting himself up for not just for Prowl's approval but all of theirs too ^_^ loved it, a nice fill to the prompts!

fianna9 September 20 2012, 11:52:26 UTC

Thanks, I was a little worried about it fitting. Jazz really didn't expect that comment in the security room.

whitefirebird September 20 2012, 11:00:14 UTC

Whee! Go Cliffjumper! Nice to see the other side of the Prowl and minis equation - a lot of fics have the fighting, followed by discipline, but not the friendship side of things on their parts.

fianna9 September 20 2012, 11:48:48 UTC

That friendship is very important to Prowl and Cliffjumper. Thank you fo rreviewing.

prowlsgirl September 21 2012, 01:28:20 UTC

It's good but I notice some repeating lines in the fic you might need to fix.

fianna9 September 21 2012, 01:57:52 UTC

I'm glad you let me know. My laptop has been jumping while I'm typing, and I'm fighting bronchitis. It's made me a little loopy.

I hope it's fixed now.

renegadewriter8 September 23 2012, 04:50:13 UTC

LOL Interesting to see Cliffy part of Prowl's past. I like it! Ohooo with the support he's got I pity the fool that tries to hurt him. Awesome prompt response! ^^

fianna9 September 23 2012, 16:40:11 UTC

Thanks. When I saw the prompt, I immediately thought of this universe. I knew Cliffjumper would have to play a part of it, since he's extremely protective of his oldest friend.

mmouse15 September 27 2012, 19:58:09 UTC

Nice! I like how protective Cliffjumper and Red Alert are of Prowl. The warning CJ gave Jazz was hilarious!

fianna9 September 27 2012, 23:40:35 UTC

Thanks. Cliffjumper and Red Alert have reason to be protective if Sideswipe is any example. Cliffjumper's warning went through several variations, but I like how this finally worked out. Glad you enjoyed it.