Comments | prowlxjazz: Fic: Good Dream by SBX

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Fic: Good Dream by SBX

Mar 30, 2008 21:34

CCL 7 is almost finshed, but this just had to be written ( Read more... )

rated pg13, fan fiction: 2008, oneshot, tf-g1: 07-08, challenge, prowlxjazz: 08

Comments 25

vejiraziel March 31 2008, 01:48:23 UTC

The end result was more adorable than smutty
That's because I don't do 'Lambo sandwiches' well. Unless the other side of the sandwich happens to be Red Alert. XD Sideswipe refuses to be drawn with his brother like that no matter how many times I've tried. I can damn well imply it happening, but I can never get it written or drawn. DX Which baffles me because I have no problem doing Cassetticon twincest, go figure.

sbx March 31 2008, 02:03:13 UTC

I understand totally. I love twincest, but I don't think I could ever seriously write it unless there is someone else added to the equation. There is a serious risk of Sunny/First Aid/Sides appearing in my "There Is" series sometime in the future.

purajo March 31 2008, 02:47:08 UTC

Oh I've written that pairing a few times... It actually came about as a crack-pairing one night a couple of years ago during an RP session on AIM with tirya56

sbx March 31 2008, 02:54:54 UTC

I know, you're the one that inspired my interest in it. :D And I absolutely love ya for it. *hugs*

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kyra_neko_rei March 31 2008, 01:49:10 UTC

YUM!!!!

I approve of this product and/or service. Wholeheartedly.

You’re telling them where and how to touch me and for once they obey your every order without question.

Prowl's not the only one who needs cooling fans after that line.

sbx March 31 2008, 02:06:13 UTC

Glad you liked it. :3 Yes, Jazz does have some very...interesting dreams.

mmouse15 March 31 2008, 04:20:24 UTC

Good dream indeed! I just love that Jazz had Prowl so figured out. Great writing, very wonderful.

sbx March 31 2008, 11:11:22 UTC

Hey, who knows you better than your significant other? :D Glad you liked it.

dark_daebereth March 31 2008, 08:59:03 UTC

Mmf, that is a *very nice* dream. Just a few typos here and there, like "world crop," instead of "would drop." Interesting enough :P But yummy all the same.

And there is something about the line "morbid fascination" that just grabs me.

sbx March 31 2008, 11:14:32 UTC

Opps, thanks for catching that. Fixed! I was tired and in a hurry when I typed this up, which is not a good recipe for accuracy. :P

Glad you enjoyed it though.

dark_daebereth March 31 2008, 11:31:12 UTC

He, you should see some of the stuff my professional writing tutors pick up on that I've written in those conditions. My own special brand of shame :P

How could one not enjoy that? :D

ladyrhiannon873 March 31 2008, 15:51:46 UTC

Who wouldn't want to see that particular four-way!I love Prowl's reaction to Jazz's dream.Great work.

sbx March 31 2008, 19:54:23 UTC

I know, right? But nobody else seems to want to write it! ;_; I'm probably going to have to suck up the guts to try myself.