What your enemy can see - Week 3

Sep 21, 2011 05:19

Title: What your enemy can see
By: Fianna9
Verse: G1
Prompt: Blind
Rating: PG13
Characters: most of the Decepticon soldiers
Warnings: Cybertronian cursing, mention of het and slash and sticky interface
Disclaimer: I don’t own Transformers. More the pity.
Summary: Sometimes, the enemy sees more than your own faction does

I don’t know where this bunny came ( Read more... )

poster: fianna9, rated pg13, anniversary challenge 11, fan fiction: 2011, prowlxjazz: 11, tf-g1: 11-12

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darkeyes_17 September 21 2011, 11:00:50 UTC
Oh my god LOOOOOLLL!!! GOes to show that the Autobots can't see what's going on under their noses, but the Con's can! Great job, it was funny to see the Con's grousing about it.

Nice work.

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fianna9 September 21 2011, 21:29:12 UTC
Thanks. I was looking at the prompt thinking about branching off from "Watching You Grow", but this bunny pressed up against the window and begged me to write.

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dark_daebereth September 21 2011, 11:33:39 UTC
Bwahahahaha. So many theories - clearly too much time on their hands. XD Loving Breakdown's little comment there, and that final bet. I wonder if the top three know the truth? ^^

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fianna9 September 21 2011, 21:36:21 UTC
Well, they think they know the truth...

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yami_samuraiflo September 21 2011, 11:53:51 UTC
A really funny fic; and for once, it's nice to see the Autobots being totally obvious. I too bet on Ratchet being the first one to notice^^

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fianna9 September 21 2011, 21:35:53 UTC
I like Nightwind's idea of Swoop becoming a medic, so I could see Swoop or First Aid finding a sparkling during a routine maintenance check and asking Ratchet what it was...oh no...the bunny's looking at me again...

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sideslip_tf September 21 2011, 12:02:47 UTC
That was a funny and lighthearted way of seeing how Decepticons gossip just like everyone else!

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fianna9 September 21 2011, 21:37:38 UTC
Thank you. I can see them sitting around debating about a lot of the various Autobot's 'facing lives. They have to do something other than tear each other apart.

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usagi_atemu_tom September 21 2011, 12:25:23 UTC
Veeeery funny. How injured pride could lead to a discussion among the Decepticons about the interfacing life of Jazz and Prowl. Sooo stupid, the Cons certainly have too much time on their servos. Oh and the contents of their bets. I think my favourite was Ratchet being the first bot to notice their relationship because of a sparkling. I can just imagine his face and the flying wrenches at the poor bot who is NOT the carrier and therefore free for reformatting without endangering the unborn sparkling. XD
Anyway, I am going quite ahead of myself. Great story, well written, enjoyed it very much. ^^

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fianna9 September 21 2011, 21:41:00 UTC
Well, they have to talk about something when there's nothing to destroy. Yeah, Ratchet would definitely be upset about them not telling him...you're adding to the bunny's interest. Thank you

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