Challenge Response: On the Fall

[darkeyes_17]

Title: On the Fall
Prompt: pxj community anniversary challenge: Tears of the East
Universe: Pre-war/beginning of war G1
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Jazz/Prowl, mentions of Ratchet and other bots.   
Rating: T
Warnings: War violence.
Words: Approx 2000
Summary: Prowl reflects on the fall of Praxus and on his survival. Prowl-centric.  
Author's Notes: 
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Comments

[thalanee]

*cries with Prowl*
So sad, but incredibly well written!

[darkeyes_17]

Thanks! Glad I achieved that vibe.

Looks like both of us are in a story posting mood tonight ;)

[thalanee]

Yep, I had to post this now, i'm getting swarmed by new bunnies... in addition to the ones still nibbling away at me XD
The carrier Bluestreak thing is turning into a whole Ark of stories and there are the new challenges.

[usagi_atemu_tom]

Poor Prowl. This story was so full with emotions and most of the time I felt like crying with Prowl. It's a good thing he has Jazz at his side to offer him comfort. Jazz had been there when hope was nearly lost and Jazz is here now.
A great and well written story. Very fitting the prompt, I love it.

[darkeyes_17]

Thank you! I'm glad you felt that, it means I did my job as an author ;)

[renegadewriter8]

Read it in FFNet, read it here. And I still love it! XD I thought that the two mechs he pulled with him would turn out to be Smokey and Blue. But it was nice to se how Prowl managed to save Blue.

[darkeyes_17]

Well Blue, yes, but I thought I'd leave the other to be ambiguous. Could be Smokey if you like.

[femme4jack]

Beautiful m'dear

[darkeyes_17]

Thank m'dear ;)

[darkeyes_17]

Can I just say what a wonderful stroke to my ego it is when someone says 'like always'? Thank you!