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Part 2 of 'Reputation'-Prowl Style

Jan 29, 2011 17:01

Title: Logical Fallacy - On Reputation (Prowl)
By: Unseen_Daydream
Rating: pg
Verse: G1
Characters: Prowl, Jazz, Vauge mentions of Optimus, Ratchet and Wheeljack
Warnings: Fluff and angst, Past relaitionships, bets, Prowl plotting, RighteousFury!Jazz
Drabble: 5 (part 2-final part)/?

Notes: This is Prowl's 'Reputation,' which while connected to the ( Read more... )

fluff, angst, prowlxjazz: 11, fan fiction, rated pg, friendship, drabbles, tf-g1: 11-12, general

Comments 24

bluetaelon January 29 2011, 22:45:32 UTC

I really liked this, I like how it explores Prowls insecurity's that we don't generally get to see.

unseen_daydream January 29 2011, 22:53:19 UTC

Thank you, I figured that everyone feels insecure at times, especially when it comes to the people we love. I was really worried about keeping Prowl's insecurities believable...I'm still not to sure about it actually ^_^;

bluetaelon January 29 2011, 23:04:48 UTC

I think it was pretty believable. You get hurt and it makes you gun shy about the next relationship and in Prowls case it hurt him enough that he stayed out of the dating pool for a very very long time. Its hard to get over that kind of betrayal and we can see Prowl is still hurting to some extent.

unseen_daydream January 29 2011, 23:13:08 UTC

Thank you, that makes me feel much better about this segment ^_^

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artemis10002000 January 29 2011, 23:20:39 UTC

Oh, this was lovely! I adore your Prowl POV and the way he has planned the seduction of Jazz as systematically as a battle.

unseen_daydream January 29 2011, 23:32:28 UTC

Thank you! I get the feeling Prowl deals a lot of things like he would a battle (Sideswipe, boring meetings, Sideswipe, Wheeljack's explosions, Sideswipe, an angry Ratchet, Sideswipe, seducing Jazz, and Sideswipe, just to name a few XD ).

artemis10002000 January 29 2011, 23:44:05 UTC

Did you by chance write any fics where Prowl deals with Sideswipe as he does with battle? That sounds like it would be very fun to read!

unseen_daydream January 30 2011, 00:05:05 UTC

nope, i haven't written it. I'm not very good a humor pieces. You should give it a shot, I bet it'd be funny!

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wicked3659 January 29 2011, 23:50:17 UTC

Really enjoyed this, it has nice flow and it's good to see things from Prowl's perspective while still keeping him very logical and tactically minded :3 very nicely done!

unseen_daydream January 30 2011, 00:05:26 UTC

Thank you!

prowlsgirl January 30 2011, 00:05:20 UTC

Love it. ^_^

unseen_daydream January 30 2011, 00:05:59 UTC

I'm very glad you do ^_^

sideslip_tf January 30 2011, 01:42:03 UTC

I like this. Interesting how when Prowl is around Jazz he can't help but just be himself (much to his own dismay). Funny at the end. Put that in your processor and think on it, Prowl!

unseen_daydream January 30 2011, 02:12:05 UTC

XD

Yes, much to Prowl's future dismay, the dreaded nickname has been born! Mwahaha! And thank you for reading!