Once Upon A Time... Ch8B

[snugsbunny]

Prowl woke early, as the sun was breaching the tops of the mountains in the horizon and shadow still lingered on their makeshift camp.

The low light gave Prowl the view of a recharging saboteur, still facing away from Prowl. He seemed to be recharging in peace and Prowl decided to leave him a few breems more before waking him.

He poured them some

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[snugsbunny]

Yeah they are getting there slowly XD (took their slagging time though)

Poor Jazz, but then he was due some angst after the rough ride Prowl went through.

Glad you liked both parts babe.

*huggle snuggles*

[dark_daebereth]

FINALLY! Pay off, of sorts. Yay for that wildneress!

The dream sequence starting this is just fantastic, and the end... well, you know what I think about the end. It goes something along the lines of SQUEE!!! in bright red pen. ^^

<3

[snugsbunny]

Yeah seeing those marks was awesome, you had fun betaing this one XD

Glad that you're enjoying this, but in honesty it wouldn't be half as good if you weren't there prodding and poking this story into shape XD

[eerian_sadow]

oh my gods, i think i stopped breathing there at the end! (of course that cold have just been my asthma acting up at the perfect moment) this was wonderful and made of tons of win.

[snugsbunny]

Well I hope its the story and not the Asthma, don't want you all breathless and ill.

Glad you enjoyed it babe.

*hugs*

[eerian_sadow]

*hugs*

totally enjoyed it.

[vejiraziel]

Gaaah, the end! The end! *flail* omg Moreeeee we needs moooooar!

[butterbean137]

EEEEP!!!!!

*flails at the absolute MAGNITUDE OF WIN AND AWESOME*

I just don't even know what to say to this amazing chapter! No, wait, yes I do ...

OMYPRIMUSOMYPRIMUSOMYPRIMUSOMYPRIMUSOMYPRIMUSOMYPRIMUSSQQUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

Fan-flippin-tastic chapter! I SQUEEd out loud so many times, my dogs got scared and left my room.

I need mooooaar!

[snugsbunny]

More will come, didn't mean to make you flail there XD (Well actually I did)

Glad you're still enjoying my sweets XD

*huggles*

[snugsbunny]

*sigh* I can never get these comments to go in the right places.

But so glad you had a total squee moment and your poor doggies XD Bless'em.

More will come my sweets.

*huggles*

[mmouse15]

ZOMG, best chapter YET!!! Having those two together makes a story good, but then you made it awesome! I loved the snuggle under the blanket and that last exhange of lines had me bouncing on my seat! I loved it.

[snugsbunny]

Glad this is still keeping you entertained, and thank you for all your inspiring and helpful reviews XD

Huggles babe XD