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[telaryn]

Title: Aftermath
Characters: Nate/Eliot
Rating: R
Word Count: 1166
Summary: Timestamp to Control. Nate takes care of Eliot in the aftermath of his confession and grapples with the fact that his feelings may be deeper than just heat of the moment.

Author's Notes: I kept very carefully out of Nate's head while writing "Control" - I thought it

Comments

[maldeluxx]

Yeah, there's something that may be left over after this night *hugs Nate* *hugs Eliot too* Something sticking to mind, that kiss. It stands out from the release progress :)

[telaryn]

Heh. Like Nate I thought I could just walk away from this story after getting his side out.

*glances at currently open file* It seems not so much.

[maldeluxx]

Oh yes, the muse can surprise one in unexpected ways *grin* My Salma does that sometimes. It sometimes pisses me off that I can't do more than write notes down right now, the studies keep me too busy to actually write out all the stuff I get (and I get bunnies a lot, at least it feels like that when I get up at night several times *LOL*).

Nate needs to have his view out, that I agree with, and I think it makes the story even better ;)

[lmx_v3point3]

It was really good to see the other side of this story, and I love that Nate was not completely sure of himself. He has his own fears and his own history to deal with, and his own control issues bourne out of that, that's essential to who he is and how he goes through life and it was really good to read that into this situation. This continues to be excellent, thanks for sharing.

[telaryn]

Thanks! That's one of the most fascinating things about true control freaks to me - they're typically the ones doubting themselves the most. He's freaking on so many levels right now, I literally couldn't let this story go yet.

[for2rusty]

Oh wow. Even though Nate knew what to do to help Eliot, he would definitely still have doubts that he was going about it the right way; and he knows his work isn't done yet.

Can't wait to read more.....there is more coming? Please?

[honeyjojames]

Oooh, that was a wonderful follow up! I for one definitely hope there will be more too! ♥

[zilentdreamer]

So good! I was thrilled to see you'd done a second part!