"I think he said something about you being like the hot sun scorching down on the, the flowers of straightness or something. Seriously, it was fucking retarded, and it needs to stop."
Hahahahahahah, oh, how I laughed, seriously. Also...Pikmin...genius (that game is evil though). I loved this, it was very funny, and just awesome in general. Amazing C;
I'm smiling like a gigantic moron right now. That is what this fic did for me, it made me smile, what with Brent being lame in the corner and Jon Walker being awesome and -- man. Your dialogue was spot-on. Totally awesome, every part of it.
So, I'm pretty sure you got a good idea about what I liked about this along the way (the whole thing!), but other than the Spencer/Brendon sections - hey! you forgot to include that as one of the pairings! they are vital to the storyline!- I still think Jon's, "Oh, I -- shit, Ryan. Ryan. Is she, let her go. Oh, god. I knew you guys had problems, but seriously, now." is my favorite line. And also Brendon having one of Patrick's bubbles. And the keyboard-arm stuff. I mentioned that I hate you for making me like Ryan/Brendon, right?
hahaha oh god i love that i don't even think of that bit as spencer/brendon. despite them MAKING OUT and spending twenty minutes doing something that is only vaguely alluded to but requires laundry money. and spencer being all distracted over it later. hahaha. SRSLY.
WHAT WOULD YOUR FIRST THOUGHT BE IF ONE OF YOUR GUY FRIENDS CALLED UP ALL "SO I HAVE A NAKED GIRL"??? especially if your guy friend was as big a crazyface as ryan ross!!!
Hey now, the Spencer/Brendon had a totally important role in the story. Other than just appeasing Laura, that is... IT WAS THE CATALYST FOR EVERYTHING. And also, Spencer would be jealous, if he didn't have a girlfriend (WHO HE TOTALLY HAS SEX WITH). Spencer.
If one of my friends was as big a CRAZYFACE as Ryan Ross, I think I would change my phone number. Just saying.
hahaha, it's true. BRENT WAS A CATALYST TOO THOUGH -- *shot* i don't know, i think it's a nice little surprise. ;D you know. mixes it up a bit. you're all, "whoa, wait!" and then like "oh, nevermind, okay. awesome." RIGHT.
ahahahaha, i don't know. i'd feel better having such a wretch in my address book. i'd feel better about myself. :
So, I'm supposed to be writing a final paper (about Smallville fan fiction, of all things) right now. But you said Brendon/Ryan and that is my kryptonite... but you also mentioned Ryan/girl, which can always be funny or uncool, and so I was like "hmm, maybe I will skim it to see if I will like it or not." AND THEN I READ THE WHOLE THING, and I don't know, I really enjoyed it and I wanted to tell you. If I don't say something now I probably won't later, so here, have some random babbling.
"Yeah, whatever," Ryan says, pulling his shirt off. "I've got more testosterone than I know what to do with."
Oh, shit, truer words will never, ever be spoken. \o/
Ryan's struggles with heterosexuality were just so spot-on, and I think God really wants me to like Brendon's tattoo, because you people keep writing things about it that make me go "aw!!!" and I love the comraderie among all the guys that just sort blends with the gay in this totally awesome way. Yeah, I'll stop babbling now. XD
i wouldn't even have mentioned the ryan/girl had ryan not managed to get her topless (and playing video games). i mean, this fic gots boobs in it!
also fact: this was originally just gonna be a real quick fluff-piece about the band dynamics if they weren't famous. then ryan ross started making these valiant attempts at heterosexuality...
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WHAT.
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Hahahahahahah, oh, how I laughed, seriously. Also...Pikmin...genius (that game is evil though).
I loved this, it was very funny, and just awesome in general. Amazing C;
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it happened to me once.
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I'm smiling like a gigantic moron right now. That is what this fic did for me, it made me smile, what with Brent being lame in the corner and Jon Walker being awesome and -- man. Your dialogue was spot-on. Totally awesome, every part of it.
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Honestly, you could write a fic of only dialogue and I'd be thrilled for life. I appreciate good dialogue above all comeshots else.
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I mentioned that I hate you for making me like Ryan/Brendon, right?
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WHAT WOULD YOUR FIRST THOUGHT BE IF ONE OF YOUR GUY FRIENDS CALLED UP ALL "SO I HAVE A NAKED GIRL"??? especially if your guy friend was as big a crazyface as ryan ross!!!
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If one of my friends was as big a CRAZYFACE as Ryan Ross, I think I would change my phone number. Just saying.
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i don't know, i think it's a nice little surprise. ;D you know. mixes it up a bit. you're all, "whoa, wait!" and then like "oh, nevermind, okay. awesome." RIGHT.
ahahahaha, i don't know. i'd feel better having such a wretch in my address book. i'd feel better about myself. :
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"Yeah, whatever," Ryan says, pulling his shirt off. "I've got more testosterone than I know what to do with."
Oh, shit, truer words will never, ever be spoken. \o/
Ryan's struggles with heterosexuality were just so spot-on, and I think God really wants me to like Brendon's tattoo, because you people keep writing things about it that make me go "aw!!!" and I love the comraderie among all the guys that just sort blends with the gay in this totally awesome way. Yeah, I'll stop babbling now. XD
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also fact: this was originally just gonna be a real quick fluff-piece about the band dynamics if they weren't famous. then ryan ross started making these valiant attempts at heterosexuality...
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