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abyssinian13 March 20 2014, 19:10:55 UTC
i was about to skip this fic when i first saw this posted (since what i read first was the title and i don't know any Swedish word) but then i saw that you were the author, and i was "oh, she's back..it has been so long, i have to read this now"..lets just say that i'm a fan..

this is really so beautifully written, from that painful goodbye in the beginning to kame's proposal at then end and all that had happened in between..and the way you laid out their story in part with different timelines i liked very much..and the emotions the words in here provoked, you had me happy, sad, angsty, nearly hating kame but can't because i can see where he's coming from, heart-broken for them both, nearly crying when they had to break up, and back to giddily happy again when they found each other again to have a second shot at love without the baggage that haunted their first one.

thank you too for giving that background on what kame has done with himself after their breakup..i was kind of wondering about that too..and all the lovely rl facts scattered all over this fic, i love reading rl facts included in fics, especially in au..

to sum it all up, i'm in love with your fic and thanks very much for all the hard work and for sharing!!!

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prologuesized March 20 2014, 19:27:56 UTC
Ah, I'm really glad that you read it! I'm glad to hear that you've liked my work :3 *huggle*

Wohoo, it's good that you were feeling things, that's what I was aiming for! And yeah, Kame can easily come across as an asshole in this fic, but really, it's just the damaged humanity in him and Jin is too naive and optimistic to understand much of it.

I like slipping in tiny bits of real life facts/assumptions~ They put a nice flavour into things :)

Thanks for the comment! I very much appreciate it!

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abyssinian13 March 21 2014, 07:02:12 UTC
hi again!! i just read the fic you did as part of HEM in tumblr..i already kind of see his side already when i was reading this one but seeing kame mustering all his resolve and finally confronting his parents and forcing them to see things his way when it comes to jin, so, so proud of him..

and to think that it had taken a lot of time alone and with jin for him to finally heal and be able to do this for himself, maybe now he can finally start healing completely, knowing that his parents are on their way to accept him and his relationship with jin..

way to make a fic even more perfect that before..

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prologuesized March 21 2014, 14:04:24 UTC
Acceptance is a curious thing, I'm honesty not sure myself to what degree Kame's parents will ever accept their relationship, but at least it's a step forward. Things will probably at the very least become tolerable. I'm glad that you enjoyed the snippet, stay tuned for a few more if you're interested ;)

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