fic: Affectionate

Nov 03, 2009 20:36

Title: Affectionate
Author: prologuesized
Pairing(s): Akame
Rating: NC-17
Genre: pwp, romance
Beta by: -
Disclaimer: mine? no. no way in hell.
Summary: It's hot. It's hot, wet and quiet, slow and lazy with rustling sounds of their bodies moving on the sheets, the wet sounds of shared kisses and silent sighs and moans.
Author Note: I have a fixation on ( Read more... )

genre: pwp, rating: nc-17, pairing: jin/kame, genre: romance, format: one-shot

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prologuesized November 4 2009, 03:59:14 UTC
...I do guess that's a reasonable reaction? XD

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sheenalinh November 4 2009, 01:12:02 UTC
is this really pwp? .___."
Yes it is, no plot but flooded with romance. You rend me speechless. Though I hate leaving nothing but outburst or I love it comment, I have to dump you some hearts. New style of writing smutt, though only kisses are the thing you described concentratively still the passion is shown completely. You make me fall deeper than I've already done with slow sex. And thank to you, the difference within sex and love making is clear.
♥♥♥♥♥

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prologuesized November 4 2009, 04:01:03 UTC
;;_____; ...I'm really glad you appreciate it like this. Nowadays people are mostly only into erotics and stuff so I wanted to take a new approach to the whole situation.

Thanks a lot for the comment and hearts!

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sheenalinh November 4 2009, 09:16:02 UTC
Just coming back from work and rereading this fic for a 2nd time. I can say I love it just from your author note about how you love everything on Kazuya's face feature. If I have known about it sooner, I think it will tempt me to write a smutt fic about mole *is having mole fetish*
I do reread and do check my own smutt. It's one of the erotic term (or trying to be erotic XDD~) you mentioned, and yes, it only lasts 2 pages long :">

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redjae November 4 2009, 03:47:25 UTC
This is seriously beautiful.
Just beautiful...

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prologuesized November 4 2009, 04:01:29 UTC
I'm glad you think so!

Thanks for the comment!

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redjae November 4 2009, 04:09:05 UTC
You make their kisses pure poetry. Insanely hot AND classy.
I really love the way you wrote this.
Thanks for sharing your gift..

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prologuesized November 4 2009, 04:13:10 UTC
Ordinary just-mentioned kisses are so plain. I wanted to take a risk and have a little fun :( Not to mention that it was pwp so that's always kinda a plus, since it isn't just a brief thingy out there, it's an actual and important part of the whole thing.

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garnet_light November 4 2009, 05:29:07 UTC
HOT, SWEET, ROMANTIC, CUTE and did I mention HOT already?
I loved this! Although there is no plot, the way they treat each other as if it's their first time and last time!
I loved how slow they were taking things in a very romantic way and they simply were cute and sweet.

Thanks a lot for writing this and sharing it!! *hugs tight*

This was truly ♥
Chuuuuuuu♥♥

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prologuesized November 4 2009, 16:13:43 UTC
I'm glad you liked it XD I tried to make it casual somehow. Dunno.

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puffie_hanchan November 4 2009, 07:35:06 UTC
yes I love his face features too XD But the part I love the most is his neck XD *has a neck fetish*

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prologuesized November 4 2009, 16:14:09 UTC
Neck fetishes are love. And yes, he does have a nice neck too... Yess...

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