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fic: The After-clock

Oct 24, 2010 23:07

Kame has a habit of breathing. Inhale, exhale, deep and throaty yet exclusively silent. Jin has a habit of finding it disgusting.

Jin closes his eyes and the picture gets smeared with a shade of muddy brown, a colour as if the moon for the sun of Kame’s ruptured idol-teeth. When his eyes flutter open again Kame’s still put where he is, eyes ( Read more... )

pairing: jin/kame, rating: pg-13, genre: darkfic, genre: romance, format: one-shot, genre: angst

Comments 18

randomicicle October 24 2010, 20:24:52 UTC

It went from angst to fluff in such a heartbeat I couldn't very well steered my boat the right direction and kept angsting till the end *laughs*. I loved it, though you must know that already.

prologuesized October 24 2010, 21:02:17 UTC

Thank you :< And I guess even with the fluff there was the general atmosphere that wasn't quite so happy and sweet. So yeah. It's life, sort of 8<

Glad you liked it.

bellemelody October 24 2010, 20:25:20 UTC

that's really angsty))) Thank you))

prologuesized October 24 2010, 21:02:56 UTC

Thank you for reading :3

chained_akame October 24 2010, 20:37:40 UTC

Thank God it became fluffy in the end because I was so tensed while reading the start that my stomach was in a terrible state,and reading the scene with Jin trying to feed Kame didn't really help *gets bricked*

But I think this is one of your best works^^ I mean,it's filled with emotions described perfectly,it's well-written and it kinds of takes your breath away (it did to me at least)

Thanks for posting it^^

prologuesized October 24 2010, 21:06:40 UTC

I'm really glad you think so 8< Thank you. It means a lot to me. As always...

And I personally like that feeding scene too :< Somehow I just have a very strong visual image of the whole ordeal. It's pretty tragic.

diisa_pinky October 24 2010, 22:51:32 UTC

save my spot, read after uni.

prologuesized October 25 2010, 07:16:40 UTC

Okay :3 Have fun in uni!

diisa_pinky November 1 2010, 10:29:14 UTC

i'm sorry for being so late!!!
but here i am~ and this fic is awesome *v*
bittersweet is ♥

prologuesized November 1 2010, 14:25:23 UTC

Aww, thank you for finally reading :3 I'm really glad you liked it!

wintersdancer October 24 2010, 23:03:58 UTC

For the first hald it was angsty and bittersweet. I was really feeling sorry for both of them. But then it all became so fluffy...and the passage was so natural! *_*

prologuesized October 25 2010, 07:17:26 UTC

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it :3