Secret Santa gift for sinaddict

[profiler_sam]

Merry Christmas to sinaddict from your Secret Santa! I’ve never written a story about Francis and John before so I hope you like this… This was a real challenge and a LOT of fun to write from different characters' perspectives

Comments

[serialbathera]

very nicely written, I am sure sinaddict will enjoy this immensly

[profiler_sam]

oh thank you so much! that means a lot to me! :)

[m_ravensblood]

Very well done. I think that you captured Bailey and his reaction to Frannie and John quite excellently. What a nice present for sinaddict

[profiler_sam]

thank you!! thats very kind of you to say so! :D

[empty_marrow]

*squee* Aww, such a nice happy Frannie/John ending, it was nice to see everyone in the family end up happy for a change!

You have a nice knack with the less popular/less written-about characters - I enjoyed reading about a Janet that I actually liked (it's hard to find anyone who writes her that way and I know for sure that I don't!). And I loved the Bailey/John scenes, I can really picture Papa Malone blowing his stack before he realizes that maybe this isn't a bad thing after all. Good job!

[profiler_sam]

thank you so much! you are very kind. i have to admit i was a tad nervous to write about these characters as i don't usually focus on them, but i ended up really quite enjoying it. i have a new appreciation for them now, especially Francis and Janet. i was just ended up really curious as to where Francis would end up... and i guess the optimist in me saw her happily with John in the end. :D

[sinaddict]

Aww, thank you. That was very sweet. :)

[profiler_sam]

you are very welcome!! :D i hope you liked it!! merry christmas!!

[melanie_anne]

Awww, very nce :o)

[profiler_sam]

thank you!!