Challenge #06: Weekly Drabble

[proceedcyclone]

Comments

[sallycandance]

Nice ending there! Very hot drabble. I like how that little information in the last paragraph turns the whole story around a bit.

It's a lovely fic, and well written - so no critique from me, even if it means missing out on a point there, writerverse-wise. ^.^

[proceedcyclone]

Thank you. I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment. :)

Personally, I was hoping it would end up longer as I'm trying to work on writing longer pieces, but the shortness and, therefore, the anonymity worked.

-Tia

[ami_ven]

Very nice! This is a unique take on the prompts, and you've done it really well.

[proceedcyclone]

Thank you. I was actually surprised more entries didn't involve sex in an elevator because I struggled coming up with another idea for that particular prompt.

And thank you for taking the time to read and comment. :)

-Tia