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Real Person // Keanu Reeves and Sandra Bullock // What I Thought I Left Behind

May 19, 2007 14:04

Title: What I Thought I Left Behind
Fandom: Real People
Characters: Keanu Reeves & Sandra Bullock
Prompt: 06. Murder
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,167
Summary: Surprise ending I loovvee it. :D
Author's Note: Ah, I don't know them. This is just how I think it should be.

( I just love the way Keanu looks at me while he's kissing me. )

Comments 8

joannacullen May 19 2007, 20:08:03 UTC

Oh, dear. I love it. :) So tragic but beautiful. Your attention to detail is so great.

moore_oaks May 20 2007, 19:24:39 UTC

Thank you!! :D

sandykeanufan May 20 2007, 06:16:35 UTC

Okay I'm on cloud 9 right now. God damn that was nice! That was short and sooo precious, thank you Katie. I bow to you , thank thank you!!!

Thank God that nobody heard me scream , when I got to the part where the kiss. That was H-O-T. I'll be printing this as a pdf now, along with your other fics.

Like Joanna said your attention to detail is so great. You really do know your characters very well. It's sad because they ARE like that in real life. They come close but then they seem to pull away from each other afterwards..they really need to grow up in that department.

*I really like the parts w/ Jesse too hehe. I'm curious about the relationship between him and Keanu. I mean the man is not blind and I think he knows his wife fond (very) of Keanu.

moore_oaks May 20 2007, 19:30:32 UTC

Thank you! Aw. *blushes* Thanks. :D

I was really debating putting in the kiss or not, but I'm glad I did because everyone seems to really like it!

I know! I'm curious because I know he made a bike for Keanu, and that they were on good terms. I don't know if Sandra and he's relationship would have made that strained or if Jesse doesn't think Keanu has a chance.

belelmo27cien May 20 2007, 08:42:54 UTC

I was so happy to see your new entries! You made my week!

I love how they come closer and then pull themselves apart again. "Her cheeks burned with shame; she thought she had left these feelings behind on the set of The Lake House." -- That's realy heartbreaking.

And I like how Keanu secretly enjoys Jesse's insecurity over him.

Thanks Katie!

moore_oaks May 20 2007, 19:31:51 UTC

And I like how Keanu secretly enjoys Jesse's insecurity over him.

I know. You know Jesse has to realize that he's nothing compared to Keanu. ;)

You're very welcome. :D

cecism May 20 2007, 12:38:25 UTC

Well, you're not the only one who loved that ending, I can assure you. ;)

Like Cheryll said, I find the interaction between Jesse and Keanu fascinating. And the way you dealt with, and weaved in, the "incident" was wonderfully done. Couldn't have given me a better Sunday night, really! *grin*

moore_oaks May 20 2007, 19:32:40 UTC

Yay! I'm glad.

Thank you! I didn't know much about it, so I had to take the little facts I did know and insert them into the story. I'm glad it came out well. :D