Innocence Lost

[pristineungift]

Comments

[rtms]

Wonderful, a Denna and Jennsen story. Poor Jennsen she just can't get a break. Love the mind tricks that Jennsen and her plight made her go through. Denna also represents strength I think to Jennsen, a pillar to lean on.

[pristineungift]

Yes, I agree. Denna is the comforter here, something I wanted to try on since I usually write Jennsen as the comforter. :)

Thanks for reading!

[tamardia]

Mmmm I like this. I'm not much for mythology in general, but this was good. The fact that there -is- mythology intervowen even made it better imo. You're great Pris :)

[pristineungift]

Thank you, bb! I can't seem to write a straight romance, no matter how hard I try. This just didn't work until I put some kind of symbolism in there. >_>

[tamardia]

Aw :3 But it went out great, so don't worry. You're one of the people managing to turn your weaknesses to strenghts.

(Also that icon, LUUUULZ, sorry but I don't think your hubby would approve xD)

[shadowsoffense]

This was a very interesting read.

[pristineungift]

Thank you. ^_^

[synergyfox]

*FLAILS* I don't know where to start! I mean it's all so epic and badass and *just flails hardcore* I-I-i *FLAILS AND TACKLES YOU* SO epic. *is a happy foxxie*

[pristineungift]

I'm glad you liked it bb! I'll be reading yours soon, promise. School started again and I got busy. ;_;

[synergyfox]

Liked it? I wvued it! *noms super yummy subway sammich* I know the feeling. School is killing me too *shudders at school*

[hrhrionastar]

Wow--this is so epic. I love that Denna is the Eve--she's the sophisticated one, and Jennsen's innocence ends up being a handicap...

And the Darken-Jennsen bit at the beginning is so good, and the whole Biblical mythology thing, and then at the end when they're off to find Richard, and Denna says, "He'll kill me," and Jennsen is so calm (and you get the feeling she won't let Richard--or Kahlan--hurt Denna...)

Another amazing story :)

[pristineungift]

Thanks so much for reading and for the great review! This was a hard one for me, because I didn't really have a direction with it until the biblical theme sort of cropped up!