Comments | prisonbreak_fic: FIC: "A Thousand Cranes" (Michael/Sara, PG)

angel_grace in prisonbreak_fic

FIC: "A Thousand Cranes" (Michael/Sara, PG)

Oct 05, 2005 22:20

Title: "A Thousand Cranes ( Read more... )

Comments 38

bogiesbacall October 6 2005, 03:44:15 UTC

That was just a lovely story. I love Michael's gift to her. So sweet and beautiful. The idea of Michael teaching her how to make a origami crane. A nice way to intertwine the idea of the crane into a Sara/Michael fic. It's just perfect.

jules27nd October 6 2005, 03:48:41 UTC

Wow, what an original and amazing idea! Love the use of the crane in the story as an agent of Sara's decision. Great job with this.

ex_metallica902 October 6 2005, 03:52:25 UTC

Definitely doesn't suck! I think it's an incredible fic. I loved how you involved the cranes.

gigglz81 October 6 2005, 03:55:46 UTC

That was freaking awesome! It did not suck one bit. I loved how you brought the cranes into it.

His grin was deliciously sinful. “Well…it’s a start.”

I can so picture that grin :)

angel_grace October 6 2005, 21:30:12 UTC

Can't you though? Wentworth Miller is downright awe-inspiring...

Thanks for the kind words. :)

double_o_sayid October 6 2005, 04:03:08 UTC

Definitely does NOT suck. Excellent fic. ♥

lenayzexok July 17 2008, 12:22:49 UTC

However, this is not to say that good fanfiction does not exist. If you're a writer of fanfiction, there are a few things you can do to help improve yourself and your writing to save yourself from being stuck with what is ignored as bad fic: Know the character.