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[liayso]

Title: What do you think of the word 'Passion?'
Characters: Dr. Sara Tancredi, Fernando Sucre
Prompt: #77 What?
Rating: G
Summary: Sucre gets a woman's opinion on 'Passion.'
Author's Notes: I'm just getting into writing. Constructive criticism is welcomed!

Comments

[certainthings]

I liked this. It was nice to see interaction between Sara and someone not named Michael. I enjoyed that you didn't have Sara liking the bit about passion and then had to backtrack and take her foot out of her mouth.

[liayso]

Thanks! I am a Michael/Sara shipper, but I want to see Sara interact with other people too.

I think the word "Passion" is a little corny and I thought Sara would think the same way. Glad you liked Foot!in!Mouth!Sara

[wentworth801]

I liked this! Looking forward to your other fics.

[liayso]

Thank you for reading and the encouragement! It's very much appreciated!

[thelana]

Very sweet. There are a lot of sentences I could totally hear her saying in her "Sara-voice". Like "Sara gave him a smile of disbelief. “You proposed in a letter? Why not face to face?”">

[liayso]

Thanks! Actually, that line was what Michael said to Sucre, but I thought she would feel the same way. :)