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Feb 03, 2006 16:22

Title: Silk Sheets and Sandpaper Pillows
Author: Elissa
Character/Pairing: Lincoln/Sara/Michael threesome
Rating: Hard R, NC17
Prompt: # 38, Touch
Summary: Where Michael is smooth curves, Lincoln is jagged glass.
Author's Notes: Written for mooyoo.

Silk & Sandpaper )

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jeyhawk February 4 2006, 00:18:53 UTC
I like the despite the ewwww het factor. *lol* Wonderful words and images, made my mind go all happy. :0)

Thanks for sharing.

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lissa_bear February 4 2006, 00:31:59 UTC
lol, glad you liked it, despite the het factor! Thanks for the comment!

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certainthings February 4 2006, 00:40:15 UTC
*wibblegaspsigh*

I ... Dammit! I'm not supposed to like Sara sex fics. Especially with Michael.

I liked the way this was written. The "Michael / Lincoln is..."

And the toucing of the backs. Loved that.

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lissa_bear February 4 2006, 00:42:56 UTC
You're not supposed to like Sara at all! lol.

And thanks, I'm glad you didn't hate it. :)

I love the comments that go, "I liked this even though it was an icky het fic".

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certainthings February 4 2006, 01:18:47 UTC
Heh. I like some het. Just not real big on Prison Break het.

I like fanfiction Sara. She's a lot better than ..the other.

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lissa_bear February 4 2006, 01:39:40 UTC
She's a lot better than ..the other

lol.

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wenty_freak February 4 2006, 01:30:21 UTC
I LOVE this!

Michael's intensity is quiet, like the calm before the storm. ...
Lincoln's intensity is howling, like a category 5 hurricane.
This is the best characterisation of these two that I've read. So hot. So good. Like the tip of an iceberg. Wonderful, wonderful!

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lissa_bear February 4 2006, 01:39:13 UTC
Wow, thank you so much! Your review made my night! I'm really glad you liked it!!!

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spoiled_andrea February 4 2006, 02:12:14 UTC
Man...Sara's ONE NAUGHTY girl. lol. I Loved It. Makes me think of Sara in a whole different way....I think I like it....More PLEASE.

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lissa_bear February 4 2006, 04:44:58 UTC
Thank you! :) Glad you liked it!

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miss_mazzie February 4 2006, 15:55:04 UTC
You have such a great way of bringing the het/slash crowds together.

["Michael is fingers, long and gentle, tracing careful patterns on tender flesh. He is whispers and sharp intakes of breath.
He bites his bottom lip and lets his eyes flutter closed.

Lincoln is palms, calloused and demanding, exploring with a reckless hunger. He is growls and guttural moans.
He bites my bottom lip and keeps his eyes locked on mine, daring me to look away.

Michael's intensity is quiet, like the calm before the storm. He's thick, still air and glassy waters with an explosion of currents and driving rain looming just beyond the horizon.

Lincoln's intensity is howling, like a category 5 hurricane. He's rough winds and rising flood waters, with energy pulsing outward from his center."]

Loved this. Great characterizations and images. Thanks you.

And, so... it's just a fantasy, huh? Hmm... well... ok.

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thelana February 4 2006, 16:25:57 UTC
That Sara sure has a spot on imagination ;D

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lissa_bear February 4 2006, 16:31:24 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind words! You're lovely!

And, so... it's just a fantasy, huh? Hmm... well... ok.

Yeah, thelana, mooyoo and I were talking about plausible scenarios and I just couldn't come up with one that wouldn't be totally out of character for both Sara & Michael. But I've got this huge, weird, Lincoln/Sara fetish, so I couldn't resist.

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wenty_freak February 5 2006, 17:23:07 UTC
I agree. I liked the weaving together of het and slash. It not only added to the piece, but it leaves the reader wondering what happened next.

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