Comments | prisonbreak100: T-Bag/Maytag, touch

kahla_w in prisonbreak100

T-Bag/Maytag, touch

Jan 26, 2006 23:23

Title: Kiss Me Deadly
Character/Pairing: T-Bag/Maytag
Prompt: #38, touch
Rating: heavy pg13/light R...bumsex with no naughty bits mentioned
Summary: Can you teach an old dog new tricks?
Author's Notes: Since there was such a desire for Passive Aggressive to end with hot making out, I give you semi-part 2, although it doesn't particularly connect ( Read more... )

Comments 9

zsuness January 27 2006, 09:29:59 UTC

Man. I LOVE the first two sentences. Like THIS MUCH.

Somehow T-Bag always managed to make a smile anything but comforting.

Ok. I LOVE your sentences. All of them.

If T-Bag thought it was a punishment, he was very much mistaken, it may as well have been a chance to see a master musician play up close and study all the little details of his craft.

Man the way you write T-Bag/Maytag is just.. PERFECT.

Whatever T-Bag was thinking about, Maytag just hoped it wasn’t someone else. He didn’t care if he was thinking of killing him or torturing him, but he would not be a surrogate corpse.

But it only took one to blur the lines and leave the victim confused to have such violence mixed with affection. Any more and the kid was bound to start cuddling. He quickly pulled away and let Maytag scoot off the bed without a word, though the fact he didn’t strangle him on the spot spoke volumes.

it was a start. And nothing ever came easy with that man.

*applauds* I'm speechless, seriously.

kahla_w January 27 2006, 09:44:48 UTC

Aw, thanks. :) I'm glad it came out well.

zsuness January 27 2006, 09:48:00 UTC

It DID. And I forgot to say thank you for the KISS.

THANK YOU! :))))

kahla_w January 27 2006, 09:56:06 UTC

lol YOU'RE WELCOME!!!!111one

T-Bag's been pulling a lot of hair lately. I think that red shoe diaries clip polluted my mind with the RK hair pullin'...

But Maytag's hair would make such a fantastic handle that it's just begging to be pulled.

Thread 5

thelana January 27 2006, 14:04:36 UTC

Awwwww, I love it! All of it!

almostforgiven January 28 2006, 02:59:51 UTC

Wow. Yet again, I am left semispeechless by the awesomeness that is your T-Bag/Maytag fics.

Someday T-Bag was gonna take advantage of all that exposed skin right in front of him.

Eerie. And Maytag asking about fucking corpses is a great idea.

ferrynheit January 30 2006, 10:35:25 UTC

“Ah, where ya goin’, girly?” T-Bag murmured when Maytag tried to flip them over so he was on top, but T-Bag pinned him down with a knee to the chest. Maytag relaxed against the mattress and lifted his hips so T-Bag could continue yanking his pants off. He never really expected to get away with it, but maybe if he kept trying, one time it would work.

Bwahaha! Pure awesomeness. Never give up, Maytag!

I loved this! Yay, T-Bag/Maytag kiss! And Maytag's obsession with him is just... guh!

The face-to-face fucking is so hot! Very intimate. But still about power.

If T-Bag thought it was a punishment, he was very much mistaken

Hell yes.

And I love that Maytag tells T-Bag to hurry up. He's such an eager beaver!

And his thoughts about the flesh and blood blowup doll and if that would be possible, and then he asks T-Bag about fucking dead girsl... pure genius! And totally hilarious too! :D

rhymeswithghoti January 30 2006, 18:17:14 UTC

Nice creepy!Maytag. Especially the kiss after talking about dead people. Weird and interesting to see both their perspectives on it.

It was an odd sensation, though not altogether unpleasant, to have someone kissing him instead of screaming and twisting their head away. But it only took one to blur the lines and leave the victim confused to have such violence mixed with affection.

Excellent lines and T-bag POV. Very nice.