T-Bag, Hours
Title: Incarceration
Character/Pairing: T-Bag
Prompt: #006. Hours
Rating: PG-13
Summary: “You’re one of us now. Ain’t no badge or uniform sayin’ you’re our keeper anymore.”
Author's Notes: Pre-series. AU. Part one of a five-part story.
( I've got something in my pocket for you~~ )
Character/Pairing: T-Bag
Prompt: #006. Hours
Rating: PG-13
Summary: “You’re one of us now. Ain’t no badge or uniform sayin’ you’re our keeper anymore.”
Author's Notes: Pre-series. AU. Part one of a five-part story.
( I've got something in my pocket for you~~ )
Glad you liked it :D There needs to be more T-Bag/Bellick lovin'.
I love it when T-Bag shouts taunting remarks from his cell and then random inmates and C.O.'s shout things back. There's another fic somewhere where T-Bag's getting down and dirty with his cellie and someone across the way shouts for him to hang a sheet, but I can't for the life of me remember what fic it was or who wrote it, but it was hilarious. So, I think scenes like that are always fun. :)
I remember reading that fic, but I can't remember which it was, either. I do agree that having T-Bag shout tauntingly out into A-Wing is fun :D
The part about the old cellie, Marcus, was great.
The majority seem to think the flashback is great. I really only thought of putting it in to break up the time between T-Bag asking for the newspaper and T-Bag receiving the newspaper.
And awesome vocabulary. T-Bag would be proud.
Eee, yay. I'm trying to become more conscious of using diverse vocabulary when I'm writing him. And since I see him as a person who's read the dictionary once or twice, I imagine him musing over words at random moments. (like in this fic, "abstain" and "inaction")
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