T-Bag/Maytag, "fixed"

[kahla_w]

Title: Revenge
Character/Pairing: T-Bag/Maytag
Prompt: #72, "fixed"
Rating: R for violence
Summary: T-Bag defends Maytag's honor and fixes that mean black man good.
Author's Notes: Ok, so I didn't have Maytag say "oh boy, do I!" to T-Bag's question, but you can assume he says that if you want. :D

Comments

[thelana]

Oh, all kinds of dark and creepy. First timer indeed.

[ferrynheit]

And then they went back to the cell and had filthy bumsex. [cue bad porno music] (And suddenly Maytag has a mustache, a la the 80's.)

Oh, sorry, did I ruin the next part? :P

But seriously, this was good. I can hear T-Bag say every word. I think you've got his characterization down good! As you should, seeing as you've been writing him for a while now.

More great scenery descriptions in the beginning, and awww, male bonding over a dying body!

The thought of Maytag running out screaming is one of the funniest things I could imagine.

[kahla_w]

And then they went back to the cell and had filthy bumsex.

Hehe, and Maytag cried just a little less...

The bumsex and killin' adequately make him a nervous wreck in the Punishment part. How sweet of T-Bag to give up the kill for him. lol

[veradeath]

Our T-bag knows the proper ways to woo a prison bitch.
This was sweet, in a creepy, dark twisted kinda way.
Poor Maytag is traumatized.

[rhymeswithghoti]

Nicely done. I like T-bag looking over his shoulder to make sure Maytag is watching. So much of what he does is for other people's benefit, like he acts like he's on stage all the time.

[the2weirdo]

Love is allowing your consort to take the kill from you. And you're right - the filthy sex would definitely be a feature, and I may have to do some embarrassingly fangirlish squeeing over semi-fluffy T-Bag now.