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Dusk (1/1)

Mar 18, 2009 13:57

Title: Dusk (1/1)
Author: linzi20
Characters: Michael Scofield/Sara Tancredi
Spoilers: Scylla 4.01
Rating: NC-17 for Sexual Content *g*
Author's Note: I'm trying to write every day, since both rosie_spleen and wrldpossibility have encouraged me to build up my stamina in preparation for writing teh_novel, so you may see my writing popping up more frequently on your flist. I hope you ( Read more... )

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sk56 March 18 2009, 20:10:10 UTC

And a nice piece of work it is, beta or not.

Just adding my voice to the advice you've already had -- writing is a skill that improves with regular practice. It doesn't have to be fabulous, it doesn't have to be the same kind of thing every day, but the discipline of daily work is the best friend you can have, if you're looking at a big project.

linzi20 March 19 2009, 02:08:20 UTC

Discipline? I'm not so good with discipline, or self control (hense getting rid of all the chocolate in my house so that I don't eat it all in one sitting). It's going to be hard. *shudders*

Thanks fo reading and the lovely words!

lizparker6 March 19 2009, 01:10:02 UTC

God linzi, i loved this! Especially the way michael explored saras wounds, knowing to be responsible and never firgiving himself, she wishing she could take his pain over her suffering away, really wonderfully.

Especially liked the course of actions - firstly gentle caress like he needed to feel for himself, then kissing, like wanting to heal them with his love, and the last, tears over something he could never take back and undo.

Wonderful work linzi, you are wonderfully 'getting in shape' for that novel..btw, WHAT NOVEL???? ;))))

linzi20 March 19 2009, 02:09:06 UTC

Thank you dahling. I've got a wee idea for a novel. Sprung up not too long ago. We'll see how it fares *g*.

*squishes*