Short fanfic

[quietsymphony]

Hello!

Since some of you urged me to post fanfiction in my intro post, here's a short drabble I wrote a while ago. :) It's one of the few things I've written that I didn't read over and go "hahaha wow, this is awful," so I thought it would be a good one to post, lol.
There's probably some grammar mistakes and stuff, but I didn't go back to edit this

Comments

[quietsymphony]

Aw, I'm glad it made you smile! :D Thanks for the comment~

[serika_san]

Awww! That was too sweet. I love the ending. X3 And I don't think it's out of character at all.

Thanks for sharing!

[quietsymphony]

Thank you! I'm glad you didn't think it was OOC, I'm trying to get better about not obsessing/worrying so much over things like that. XD But thanks again, I'm really glad you enjoyed it~

[mildmilotic]

awww, that was cute! :D

the only feedback i can think of is for this part, "the duck perked its head up..." and maybe switch the pronoun to 'her' since that's how it is in the rest of the fic? ;3;

anyways, i don't think this was out of character at all, and it was very sweet ;A; i liked it a lot and look forward to any more you may share! :D

[quietsymphony]

Thank you! :3 I'm happy you liked it!

Ah, darn, I should've noticed that. >_<; Oh well. Thank you for pointing it out~

[swanreaper]

This is thoroughly adorable. And it fits the characters quite well. I'm glad to have gotten a chance to see it. <3

[quietsymphony]

Thanks~ ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[insaneladybug]

This is beautiful. I think they sound IC! Fakir's musings are wonderful. I particularly love the paragraph about his sources of comfort, and the final paragraph. The last one is just perfect.

[quietsymphony]

Yay, I'm glad they sound in-character; thank you so much! :)