PROTECTION EDITS!!
I have posted new versions of Chapters 1, 2 and 3 of Protection. I went back and read them again the other day and found myself less than thrilled with their style. They are the only chapters that I finished and posted before Sugar started betaing for me and I felt like there was much to be improved.
I ended up adding a new scene with Lupin and Harry in chapter one that I hope you enjoy. You don't have to read it to understand what is going on later, but as I was editing I felt like it should be there. I also expanded Harry and Ginny's interaction at the ministry and journey to the coffee shop to fill in some sketchy logic I used the first time around.
Anyway...they're posted and if you feel like going back and taking a look, I hope you like the additions. :)
I ended up adding a new scene with Lupin and Harry in chapter one that I hope you enjoy. You don't have to read it to understand what is going on later, but as I was editing I felt like it should be there. I also expanded Harry and Ginny's interaction at the ministry and journey to the coffee shop to fill in some sketchy logic I used the first time around.
Anyway...they're posted and if you feel like going back and taking a look, I hope you like the additions. :)