THE RETURN 39-Three 1/3 [Ensemble] R

[princess72385]

Title: The Return 39-Three [Pt I]
Rating: R
Word Count: 20,797 (Pt I: 5,150)
Characters/Pairings: Mac, Veronica, Logan, Lilly I, Duncan, Dick, Wallace, Piz, Parker, Casey Gant, Lilly II, Alicia Fennel, Trina Echolls, Mrs. Lee, Celeste Kane, Jake Kane, OFCs, Carrie Bishop, Susan Knight (mentions: Darrel Fennel, OFC, Weevil, Aaron Echolls and Keith

Comments

[a_h_c]

I don't know if I've said lately, but I am very glad you are writing this again. I like seeing the folks in the future, although Lilly and Weevil's drama is getting very drawn out. The two of them need to suck it up. It is too much to ask that he heard her drunken rant at the party?

Maybe it's the effect of being in an airport, but there are some minor editing things that could be fixed, if you feel like going back to it.

I am looking forward to the next section!

[sanya4]

Great chapter. I especially liked the conversation between Dick, Logan and Duncan when they were discussing Mac's pregnancy and becoming a parent.

I agree with Parker and Veronica - this is going to be a fun and interesting Thanksgiving.