Comments | prillalar: PoT Fic: The Brown (or Common) Rat, Yanagi/Kirihara

prillalar

PoT Fic: The Brown (or Common) Rat, Yanagi/Kirihara

Jan 10, 2011 16:22

My first time with this pairing, written for kestrelsan. ♥

The Brown (or Common) Rat by Halrloprillalar / prillalar
Prince of Tennis, Yanagi/Kirihara, R, 1000 words
Care and feeding of.

( The door bangs closed. )

fic, tenipuri, yanagi/kirihara

Comments 19

reposoir January 11 2011, 01:44:59 UTC

GASPSHOCK

Hal, you wrote YanaKiri!

And it was adorable. ♥

prillalar January 11 2011, 13:43:53 UTC

I think the only way we can balance the universe now is for you to write some MomoKai. :D

I'm glad you liked it! I'm getting much more interested in Rikkai these days.

juanita_star January 11 2011, 01:55:57 UTC

I dont now what to say... but that is because i suck at english xD

So I just gonna say: Fantastic!

I was between laught and romantics feelings.

""Jerk!" Akaya yells."

xDDDDDDDDDD!!

Oh, and I loved those sexy parts too.

prillalar January 11 2011, 13:45:05 UTC

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for taking the time to let me know. :) Poor Akaya, but he was fun to write.

kestrelsan January 11 2011, 03:12:27 UTC

Yay, you posted it! I just love subtle and layered this is--I feel like you captured them so well. And like everything you write, every line and word has meaning. Also, this line: Sometimes Renji thinks you'd only have to flip one bit in Genichirou and he would be Akaya makes light bulbs go off in my head every time I read it. Of course it also makes me want you to write some SanaKiri *g*. Hmmm, next year, if not sooner :D.

Thanks so much for this again ♥.

prillalar January 11 2011, 13:49:00 UTC

Yay! I'm still so happy you liked it. :) And that line was kind of a lightbulb moment for me too.

What will you trade me for the SanaKiri, hmm? :D

kestrelsan January 12 2011, 13:22:18 UTC

Hmmm, for SanaKiri I might do TezuRyo *g*.

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prillalar January 11 2011, 13:51:00 UTC

I am well pleased with that icon. :) :) :)

I'm really glad you liked it! They are really growing on me as a pairing.

bombaygin January 11 2011, 15:29:07 UTC

Hal. HALLLLLLLLLLLL. Hallllll. *whines and loves on you* I have missed these silly Tennis boys and you remind me again and again how much I love them. I love Renji and his rat -- how Renji is so ridiculously warm in his center and how Akaya is so demanding of his attention. Sweet little Akaya.

I just love how Renji is all business. I swear, you really write the most perfect data boys. And grouchy Sanada. I want to giggle at him like a little school girl. So gruff.

Mannn. They are truly so compatiable, yet volatile. There is something so fascinating about this pairing and I just love it so much!

Yay for Hal's Tennis boys!

prillalar January 17 2011, 03:49:25 UTC

Aw, what a sweet comment! I'm so glad you liked this! I did find it a bit difficult to write, but I feel like I understand them better now. And like them so much more. :)

I don't know why Akaya is so ridiculously squishable but I'm glad that Renji can see it. :D