PoT Fic: Moves (MomoKai)

[prillalar]

bus trip, iPhone, chocolate, this

Moves by Halrloprillalar / prillalar
Prince of Tennis, MomoKai, PG13, 600 words.
Past, future, karaoke.

Comments

[waxrose]

Oh my god, Hal. How can these two still make me feel so choked up when you write them? :(

[prillalar]

That was, like, the fastest feedback ever! So glad I can still make you love them. :)

[reposoir]

Lush!Kaidoh is excellent. As is smoking!Momo.

MomoKai still is :|

;)

[prillalar]

You can take comfort in the sad ending. :D

[vissy]

Tragedy and vomit. Aw.

[prillalar]

The vomit is what makes it epic.

[eternalsayonara]

"That's kind of insulting," Momo said and handed Kaidoh his handkerchief.

I have to admit I laughed at this, partly because I threw up just yesterday for the first time in long, long while, and also because it's funny on so many levels.

He took Kaidoh's hand and pulled him out from under Momo's arm. "I'll take him home."

Ohhhh. ;___; As much as I love Inui and the caring boyfriend he is here, I kind of want to kick him. >/

Inui walked away, Kaidoh stumbling behind him, Momo's handkerchief crumpled in Kaidoh's hand.

I admire this sentence for many reasons, not the least of which is the way you incorporated three males in it without it being confusing in the least. ^^

[prillalar]

I'm glad you enjoyed this. :) I felt badly for Inui on a couple of levels, poor guy.

I hope you're feeling better today!

[kestrelsan]

See, this is what makes MomoKai so freaking awesome :D.

[prillalar]

It's the barfing, isn't it? :D

[kestrelsan]

It is! And also I love it when they're together but not, like, together *g*.