PoT Fic: Imperfect Match (Atobe/Tezuka)

[prillalar]

My other spring_fluff contribution, written for bobbissimo. I admit to struggling a lot with this, but I liked it in the end.

Imperfect Match by Halrloprillalar / prillalar
Prince of Tennis, Atobe/Tezuka, PG-13, 3000 words.
Nationals and other things.
Timeframe: Based closely on manga canon up to Genius 340 (semifinals), after which it diverges. You tell me whether or not that'

Comments

[annotated_em]

*laughing* I really liked that. Tennis as the ultimate aphrodisiac. *grin*

[prillalar]

For these two, I'm sure it is. :D Thank you!

[moeruze_burning]

...LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE...

THAT'S WHAT I FEEL FOR THIS. *______________* Ho boy...

AtoTez is one of my favorite, special pairings. :D And I was DELIGHTED to see one of my favorite InuKai authors had written it. <333

This was so beautifully written. :D There's subtle repetition which ties it together nicely, and Tezuka's not a brick wall. He's still toast though.

The kissing and the getting off and the tennis and the Tezuka being distracted. *___* So pretty and hot and keysmashable!!

<33333333333333333333333

[prillalar]

I'm so glad you liked this! They are such an interesting pairing, I think. A really strong connection but difficult to actually get together. Thank you so much for all the love. ♥

[moeruze_burning]

:DD Yes, they are interesting. So interesting to the point of making me obsessed. XD;; I really enjoy the chase of getting them together, probably even more than the result.

You're welcome. ^__^ <3

[lafuego]

That was absolutely fantastic! Truly! That was a great read! Thanks for sharing!

[prillalar]

Thank you! That's great to hear. :)

[serenia]

That was very nice! I liked Atobe saying that next year the roses would be to console him, and I liked Inui calling Tezuka from the other side of the room, just to ask who he was messsaging. I also liked the fishing reference near the end there. All the little details. ♥

[prillalar]

Inui was a lot of fun in this, even if he didn't have a very big role. :) I'm really glad you enjoyed the story!

[katherine_15]

Absolutely GORGEOUS. So so stark and lovely and aaah, the passion in those lovely boys. *loves*

[prillalar]

Thank you so much!