PoT Fic: The Snake, the Slug, the Frog, and the Racquet (MomoKai)

[prillalar]

I wrote two stories for spring_fluff. This was a pinch-hit, written for lihsa. Your request was so great, I actually outlined another story from it as well, which I hope to finish before the end of the summer.

MomoKai + Horio -- did anyone have any doubt that this was me? :D

The Snake, the Slug, the Frog, and the Racquet by Halrloprillalar / prillalar
Prince of Tennis,

Comments

[justsonya]

Absolutely lovely! <3

[prillalar]

Thank you!

[meiface]

This story made me ♥♥♥ like crazy. Your MomoKai (and Horio!) always makes my day. :D Yay Hal!

[prillalar]

Thank you, Mei! Horio is like the Secret Sauce. :D

[radicaldreamer]

I simply love your characterization of the two ♥ It's so spot on! And you have such an incredible feeling for the japanese culture, you take care to mention the little things that really makes the picture more vivid (and accurate!)... have you, by any chance, attended a japanese highschool?

It's way late and I really should sleep, so unfortunately I can't give you a longer/better review right now, but I wanted to at least leave a comment saying that I enjoyed this fic from the first paragraph til the last!!

Thank you!! ♥

[prillalar]

Wow, that is SO great to hear, especially about the Japanese culture. I just try to be really careful when I write and to remember things from research and from the 11 billion other series I follow. Thank you so much! ♥

[hungry_worm]

So lovely! ^_________^ *loves all of it with fiery passion*

[prillalar]

Yay! I will bask in your fiery passion. :D

[ficcentricity]

"Thank you," he said, because he had been well brought up.

Oh, Kaidoh. ♥ So well-mannered and cute. Reading this was such fun! Thanks for sharing. :)

[prillalar]

He's my sweetie. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!