This is utterly charming, sweet, and very funny. Every time I read one of your stories, I'm amazed by the way you just keep getting better and better. This could easily seem like a bit of fluff, but it's so carefully crafted! It's got a theme that loops around, it's good structure, it's got *style*.
I love Kaidoh's brainfreeze.... and Inui's fashion sense. XD And all the boyfriend stuff they do...I'm all happy and fluffy!! Thanks so much for this!!
Damn, Hal, the fact YOU share fic with us on your birthday is just...awesomely kind and generous of you that we are able to read something this lovely and sweet and I was so terribly amused and not surprised that you had kaidoh not liking the bugs and Inui hopelessly clueless and yes. I wanted to comment and spread the happy and say thank you so much. &hearts
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You, in short, rock.
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