PoT Fic: Point C, Fuji/Kaidoh

[prillalar]

Good job, Garland.

Point C by Halrloprillalar / prillalar
Prince of Tennis, Fuji/Kaidoh, R, 800 words.
Fuji didn't mean for it to happen.

Comments

[grasshopper]

I WIN.

I just had to say that before I read.

[grasshopper]

Seriously, I love you. Also, turnabout is fair play, indeed. I think now I might owe you InuTez? Not that I've been writing it in my head all day, or anything. >_>

straight as any number of straight things. Like a ruler. Or Momoshiro.

OMG HAL SIMILES, I DIE. Also, straight!Momoshiro is hot as fuck. He should get with one of his teammates' hot older sisters, like, right now.

And oh, the uncertainties and the fumbling and Kaidoh's regret. Break my heart, why don't you. The last line is killing me.

To sum up, I am half convinced that Fuji stole your pants.

[grasshopper]

I will just keep commenting, okay? Because Kaidoh being more experienced than Fuji is somehow the hottest thing to me. Not that I think of Fuji as knowing everything, in fact I love the fact that he goes on instinct rather than know-how and experience, even in canon. Maybe it's the implications of InuKai that it brings up, what with that last line, and wondering where exactly Kaidoh got his experience, and oh :(((

[prillalar]

I wouldn't say no to InuTez. Alternately, you could read all of Slam Dunk and then write me some MitKo. :)

I so agree re Straight!Momo. If I were younger, I'd want to corrupt him myself.

Because Kaidoh being more experienced than Fuji is somehow the hottest thing to me.

Oh, to me too, for all the same reasons.

I'm so glad you liked this so much!

[leviosa8]

Aaaaaw, I have been longing to read some FujixKaido ever since that time Fuji made Kaido blush at the airport ^___^ And you managed without *really* breaking the InuKai.
Now, straight as Momoshiro, that must be one of those things Fuji doesn't really know yet, isn't it?
Maybe Mulder can find your pants, but I am sure he'll blame it on UFOs and leave you as you are now...

[prillalar]

It's hard not to take the InuKai into consideration. It colours everything I write about Kaidoh. But Fuji/Kaidoh is growing on me so much!

Mulder never seemed the type to be much concerned about pants. :)

[sarahofcroydon]

Wow. bllrbbrbt. That was pretty damn fine. It really brought out something fascinating in both of them. I love how you can do that so succinctly and poetically all at once. ^____^

[prillalar]

That's what I find most fun about writing PWP -- seeing what the characters bring out in each other. I'm still kind of dancing around Fuji, trying to find how I want to write him. Kaidoh, well, is Kaidoh. :)

[prillalar]

Those pants sure do get around!

I wonder how Inui will react. In the meantime, Ryoma can "comfort" Kaidoh.

[xiahtic]

...Yeah, lead here by Garland. :>

Um. Wow.

That was unbelievably awesome. I am just floorfaced by it. Gah. I love how it was KAIDOH who had the skill and not Fuji. That was so unexpected, yet I could clearly see it happening. And the Apple Pi hints at the end. Awesome. I loved this fic so much. Wow.

God, fangirl much, Jamie? *headdesk* I'll have to go stalk read your other stuff now, because Maxie just said something about MomoKai. *_*

[prillalar]

Thank you so much! I wanted to make things a little different; it's more interesting to me that way. I haven't written Fuji very much and I'm still working him out in my head. He's such a difficult character to get hold of.

There's a link in my userinfo to a post that lists all my PoT fic by pairing, so that's a good place to start if you want to find all the MomoKai. They're a favourite of mine. ♥