This. Here and Now. With You.

Mar 06, 2014 11:32

rating: pg
pairing: Kyungsoo/Jongin
length: 5.8k
summary: “I’m clueless, so I’ll trust you on this.”
note: This is fluff fluff fluff, nothing more. (Also I could call this indie!au tbh) I switch povs at weird times i'm sorry for that. Hope you enjoy it.

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au: 80s, one shot, kaisoo, rating: pg

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kais March 10 2014, 18:24:55 UTC
I honestly think this is one of the cutest stories I've ever read. I love how everything flows so smoothly and there's unnecessary denial of feelings like most fics have. Not only is the plot literally the best, but you write so well and concise that the entire time I was reading this I had butterflies in my stomach. I think you captured their personalities really well, and I'm so so so freaking thankful you didn't put kaisoo into 1 of those two tropes (Jongin the badass playboy whereas Kyungsoo is vanilla with a blush, or Jongin the pining fool and Kyungsoo the ice prince). I like to think that in another world, this is how their love story would have actually unfolded. And the way you describe everything! It honestly makes me jealous of you. I don't think I've ever read a cuter kiss, and the timing was absolutely perfect-- completely unexpected to the point a throng of butterflies just blatantly exploded in my stomach. There was this very slight build up of tension, but not at that moment, and it was absolutely perfect.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing this! I haven't read any fics in a long time, but I'm SO glad I took the time to read your story!

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prideaux March 10 2014, 22:37:56 UTC
Oh my god. I don't even know how to reply to this.THANK YOU SO MUCH. Knowing that you took the time to read my story and that you enjoyed it to this extent makes me so happy i :'))) and ooh i'm so glad you think my characterization was on point wowowie <3 Again, your words made my entire day/week/month/year. Thank you <3

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