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yuseon August 25 2011, 09:19:20 UTC
why are there no commets on this brilliant piece of written artwork its just omg i cant -

just. wow. i'm like really mindblown and incoherent and everything about this is just perfect and the au was incorperated so well.
i'm really not good at writing comments, but here goes~

lol no jk i'm still mindblown but here's some stuff that i can process and put into words for now;

first off, the pairing just works great. usually, i'm not fond of dominant min and bottom jia (actually i like jia/fei xD), but i think this was just very well written. insecure and shy jia was absolutely win, but i totally loved how jia started forgetting things and all. just wow.

min was just a sneaky little diva. i dont know if you meant for it to be open-ended (or maybe its just my intense lack of sleep orz), but in one perspective it seems as if min just needed a companion or someone to be with and jia just so happened to be there; but in another, she may have genuinely loved jiaboo.

lol i'm leaning towards both, but i love the whole deserate min going on. it's very heart-wrenching actually. how min found someone to be with but she drove them over the edge.

i think this fic goes very well with Song Jieun's Going Crazy btw, is it inspired by it in any way? The engtrans kinda applies (x

///okay yeah my brain is goop i slept at 4am yesterday and it is now 2:17 so i prolly have typos and shit and i probably didnt write out my thoughts well.

BUT I LOVE THIS FIC SM ♥ !!! \o/~

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kingdra August 28 2011, 15:42:14 UTC
haha omg thank you so much! ♥♥♥ sdfljlkj i don't know how to respond to this comment coherently
lul, actually not sure who bottoms/tops in this relationship, i think i usually write min as a powerbottom or something orz;; for some reason i always write her as slightly crazy >___>
and nah, actually mostly inspired by gdtop's 'high high', i've never actually heard going crazy before (i think) XD
THANK YOU SO MUCH OMG ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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