[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 26 ~Life Goes On~

[prettyorianna]

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[sour_bubblegum]

woohaaaa

not a cliffhanger! not fair :(((((((((( i want to continue reading!!!!! you meanie~

uhoo! love is in the air, isn't it?? :3 aren't akame cute? *-*
thatnks for the really fast updates :D
loved them :D
hope you'll post the next chapies soon <3

[prettyorianna]

I'm happy you like the story so far. I'll do my best not to make you wait so long. But next chapter goes back to the present, where they're trying to rescue Tatsuya so you'll have to wait until the chapter after that (chapter 28) to find out what the cliffhanger is.

I know, I know. I'm sooooo mean.

But yeah, I'll do my best to get the updates done soon.

[ext_458754]

hahaha u BIG MEANIE =P
love it

[prettyorianna]

Yeah, I guess I am a big meanie LOL especially since the cliffhanger isn't continued until chapter 28. You have to go back to present!Kame in chapte 27 LOL

But I'll do my best to not make you wait long.

[starg8fan_liz]

I want to cry over how nice the twins were ;__; such a contrast to everyone Kame has met so far! and it's too bad he's not 'friends' with Yoko anymore :( poor Kame, being in such a funk :( and OMG CLIFFHANGER 0_0 wonder what happens >_<. can't wait to find out ^_^ awesome chap, looking forward to the next with present Jin/Kame XD

[prettyorianna]

Yeah, I don't think many of you expected the twins to be nice. But I like 'em LOL.

It doesn't look like I'll get much writing done today, but I'll do my best to not make you wait too long.

[joatex]

Wow the twins seem nice. When I they first showed up I thought they were a bit scary. Ryuichi made them sound so bad.

that part with Kame in the end was so depressing to read. I feel so bad for him.

Oh no! just when things were getting at least a little better. But why a cliffhanger that's so mean! (>_<) I was so getting into reading then it reach the end and I was like what! I want to read more!

Thanks for the update. Can't wait to see what happens next (^_^)

[prettyorianna]

Well, as an apology for the cliffhanger, I can tell you that everything changes in Chapter 28. Everything.

Ryuichi's a selfish, lying ass who's only nice if it gets him something he wants. Poor Kame, though. Ryuichi told him all that stuff and got him all scared and everything.

But yeah, Kame's... starting to crack a bit, I think. He's at a point where the answer to the question of whether he'd rather be selling himself or rather be dead is not quite so certain.

But, like I said, everything's about to change.

But first, back to the present and rescuing Tatsuya mission.

[lost_sky6]

I have no idea how I let two updates pass by, but I caught up~ lol
Anyways~ I didn't expect those twins to be so nice. It was touching. But it's sad to see Kame so depressed. It's really just him and snoopy. It sucks about Yoko and Hina. Hopefully, he'll meet the guys from Kizuna soon.
That's a mean cliffhanger! >.< I want to know what happened!
Thanks for the update!! I'll be waiting for the next one~

[prettyorianna]

Well, in your defense, I did post them pretty close together. One at night and the other the next morning LOL

Yeah, the twins are kind of awesome. (^_^)

At least Kame still has his Snoopy doll. I dunno, maybe it's silly, clinging to a stuffed animal when you're 15 already, but I always found my Snoopy doll very hug-able and comforting even into my 20s LOL I wish I knew where it went.

It's another 7 or so years before Kizuna is official formed but he starts meeting people well before that. But he has two major change points he has to experience to get him there. THe next one is coming up in Chapter 28 but I'm not sure how many chapters it'll take till the second one.

Anyways, I'm sort of dodging back and forth between writing and cleaning but I hope to have chapter 27 done by tonight and chapter 28 by tomorrow night.