[fic] The Things We Can't Control - Chapter 15 ~Going Home~

[prettyorianna]

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[turtleish]

Yatta~ New update ^^
It doesn't matter if you didn't fit everythibg you wanted to in this chapter because then it is still possible to look forward to it ;) I hope your scratch heals without complications (not that it should but one never knows).
Thank you for the update =D

P.S. I really liked it when Jin carried Kame. I really really really liked it.

[prettyorianna]

It'll be fine. It's not nearly so bad as that time I sliced my finger open cutting veggies. I'm more concerned about my kitty. I always feel so bad taking her there because she gets so scared. And I've never had to board her overnight before.

LOL yeah, I liked it when Jin carried him too LOL. I think perhaps all of Kizuna has a new respect for Jin LOL

[pinkporca]

Thank you for the update. The length of the chapter was fine. The part where Jin just dominated Kazuya was funny especially when Koki stated that they should keep him. Loved it. Hope all is well.

[prettyorianna]

Well, someone needed to put their foot down. Kame needs to take better care of himself and Koki and Tegoshi are probably glad to have someone on their side LOL since Kame's so stubborn. But it was kinda funny LOL.

[japanese_eyes97]

you're back. i've spent the last two days on your journal reading Catch Me, Lose Me, Find Me, Heal Me

I think that was the title. anyways i'm glad to see new updates(:

[prettyorianna]

Yeah, that's the title. CMLMFMHM LOL My first fic.

I'm still reading your fic with Junno and Kame. I just haven't had much time for commenting but I'm going to. I'm sooooo behind in so many fics I'm reading LOL. Yours, The Puzzle, Make You Mine... a whole lot of 'em LOL

I'm glad you like the update (^_^) I try to not make you guys wait so long.

[japanese_eyes97]

haha you're reading the same fics i am! that was your first fic? i never would've guessed... it was so good!

comments are nice but as long as you're reading i don't mind. behind in reading mine? what chapter are you on?

thanks for reading 'Things' though(:

[prettyorianna]

Well, it's my first fic but it's not the first thing I ever wrote. THe first thing I wrote that I actually finished (sort of) was the SEcond Worst Piece of Literature in the Entire History of the ENglish Language (yes, that's what I call it) when I was in 9th grade. Plus I have two novels and a deceptive short-story collection... that's not actually a short story collection. But those aren't done. I stopped working on Cat Summers to write CMLMFMHM and then I just kept writing fics.

Though that poem in CMLMFMHM is older that the fic.

[joatex]

Update! Yay!(n_n)

Kame must be so tired, I surprised how he didn't pass out.You know before he got the 4 hours of sleep at the church.

Massu has a weird way of answering the phone. It's seems like something he would do though and it's cute. (^▼^)

lol I couldn't stop laughing at the part where Jin carried Kame all the way to his office to sleep. (^_^) I guess Kame can't be as stubborn with Jin around.

Thanks for the update. (n_n)

[prettyorianna]

Massu answers the phone the same way I do. Usually I use the "housekeeping" on but sometimes I change it up with the "domino's pizza" one. My mom laughs every time, but my hubby's pretty jaded to 'em. I'm trying to come up with some other one and if I do, I'll probably give that one to Massu too.

I imagine Jin would have had a harder time picking up Kame if Kame wasn't so dog tired. But someone needed to do it.

[starg8fan_liz]

Jin seems to really care about Kame, so sweet ^_^ Great chap! Looking forward to the next!!♥♥♥♥♥♥

[prettyorianna]

Well, if you tell Jin that, he'll probably deny it. He'd probably say he just wants Kame at his best to help save Tatsuya.

But we don't believe that, do we? LOL